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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Well hello!
In case you hadnt realised, I left my digibox on january 28th!
But now, since im back via the net, I guess I could put some touches on it for ya...
And, oh yeah, IM BACK!!! 
A2059436 - Yoome 2
Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Yes, and because you are soo polite in asking (or atleast someone was but I cant remember who...) it is now updated, please feel free to view with happiness that I have obeyed your wishes...
You see, while I was off, I got a pc and learnt myself loads of tags off by heart, and since I already knew most of them from being here, it feels a bit weird at first, but im getting back in the habit.
Anyway, there you go... its in guideml, it has all the things you all requested, it even has some extras which make it look more proffessional??
(Please dont quote the spelling... LOL!)
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
Only thing I really notice is a lot of subheadesr with very little text under them, but I'm not sure if there's anything wrong with that.
Can't help with the content though.
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Oh my god im recieving an applause!
I dont know wether to faint from happiness or to say thanks for reading and do you think THIS will get in now?
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
Eventually it certainly could get in...
As I said I don't know anything about the content.
Perhaps you should reread the thread and see if there's anything you didn't change before?
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Why, whats wrong with it?
If theres anything you think could be changed, I will consider it, remember I am pretending to be smart now so I am making an effort!
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
This is a very illuminating page. You might recognize it also!:
F48874?thread=347270?thread=&skip=0&show=20
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
What the first page of this thread???
Sorry, dont follow....<???>
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
Yeah
I mean, have you made all the changes that peopel suggested? YOu were a bit reluctant before.
I should say though that you wait for someone who knows a bit mroe about this topic. I can't really help much here.
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Well ok then, I feel it fair to actually SHOW yoome 2 chat services to the web, and bring it to you!!!!!!!!!
#
Please wait while I update...
A2059436 - Yoome 2
Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Ok, I have linked to yoomedias site, and I have found two pictures which I have also linked to.
Do you like it? 
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
Lemme look...
It's much better than it was a couple of weeks ago that's for sure.
Though you can't include "By Ryan (Dodzim145651)" It already says that you wrote it anyway.
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Ok then!
Steal my popularity...LOL!
Ill remove it now...
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
Okay thoguh here's something I'm noticing:
You have a very large number of Subheaders, many of which have only one or two sentences under them.
I suggest that you have an introduction first, then a header and a paragraph or two about what is Yoome2, which would incldue the content under "What Yoome2 offers", "The Company", "Chat Away on Yoome2", "The Forums", "Privacy Matters", and the pictures.
Then a second header (or maybe a subheader) about subscribing, including the rest of the content.
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Its gone, by the way, dont forget to share that cake, ive had no lunch and it looks nice!
(YUM YUM LOL!)
(wipes mouth)
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 28, 2004
Ok ive done all that, I have to go now but ill be on tomorrow...
Bye!
Dozdim
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AK - fancy that! Posted Feb 28, 2004
*though
Now I'm going to do somethign you won't like and list some of the errors I can see.
and has been on ever since --> which has been on ever sincee
Yoome 2 has forums that also suit all needs, the forums work in the same way as the guide system on here, they wont always accept your messages, and it will take 12 hours for your message (if accepted) to be posted on Yoome 2 forums. -->
Yoome 2 also has forums that suit all needs. The forums work much like the guide system on H2G2, except that they don't always accept your messages, and it will take 12 hours for your message (if accepted) to be posted on Yoome 2 forums.
Also, the lines right before that say that it suits almost all needs, which is a bit repetitive as this does also.
A bit like the chat rooms --- What are?
That's for part of the entry. though the Subed might cover a lot of that.
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Dozdim145651 Posted Feb 29, 2004
yeah, and I quote that you are asking me to change....
I believe it is this exact piece...
and has been on ever since --> which has been on ever sincee
Are you asking me to do spelling mistakes in my entry? (smileys like a smart-arse)
Any way, ill have a look, but yeah they probably will cover that, is there a way I can promote this because it seems most people have unsubscribed!
Ill post a link to this in some message boxes..
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