h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Yoome 2 - A2059436
Author: Dozdim145651 - U526319

This is my entry on Yoome 2, it was originally entered in October 2003, but taken out due to complications, this copy is a highly advanced copy that has been updated several times allready.
The goal is still to get it in the guide, so please have a read and help get it picked.

Thanks for looking, but please make sure you read my entry before making comments on it.
All comments are welcome, but preferably ways to make it better please.

I would also like to point out, it is now in Guide ML, and it has been updated to everything asked of it.

Looking better

Can you remove the very first header? It's not needed as the title forms the first header.

Also, you mention subscription prices - are they one-off, or weekly, or monthly, or what?

One thing we have to be very careful about is appearing to advertise. If the prices are removed from the entry it will reduce the likelihood of us being accused of advertising this service rather than just discussing it.

ok, I will remove the prices and the header, anything else?

No offense, but I will ask you to look more closely under other price plan information...

Other plan information

The Chat packages (plans) are pay monthly but due to old payment plans Yoomedia shut down Yoome 2 then restarted but still have not solved their problems, so you should pay once a month. All the under 18 things mean that you cannot access chat rooms for adults only, or chat rooms where swearing is allowed.

This is going to be taken out now...