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Entry: Roundabout Dogs - A17300323
Author: Milla (Alchemilla Digitalis) Sore... - U153664

A17300323 - 'Roundabout Dogs'
U153664 Milla (Alchemilla Digitalis)

Any suggestions welcome! (this is my first try at Peer review!)

This is a very interesting article, well done.

Unfortunately I'm not very good at reviewing and spotting the typos etc, - but someone better will be along shortly I'm sure.

I enjoyed reading this, but I suspect there may be a problem with the links.

Fizzy!

I don't know any foreign sites which show the photos, which are copyright of the paper, and it's too far for me to go take my own photos...

Don't worry, someone who knows about that stuff will be along sometime soon - they'll let you know how to get around it.

Milla, you could try google pictures, look what I got when I did :
http://www.hn.se/bild_arkiv/98/00000218398.jpg
As I don't speak Swedish, i only put 'rondell hund' for search, I'm sure you'll be able to think of something more precise.

Brilliant - love the idea.

Milton Keyne's concrete cows spring to mind - where are the English Anarchists ?

It sounds funny, and I love hte story, but I lost track of things somewhere around the bone. Who put the bone there? And then who put the white wooden dog there? And the sculptures that follow?

If I gathered correctly, it was unknown persons sneakily doing this when nobody saw. Could you specify that, so I don't wonder about it?

Can I use Google pictures without infringing on copyright laws then?

I'll try to make the story clearer... I had no idea myself why it started, until I looked it up. Now all the dogs are put up by strangers, in the night...

Right. I figured out how to link to the image only - and since I am not the one publishing the image, just linking, it should be OK with copyrights?

I tried to clear the story up a little... See if it works?

Wow! Roundabout dogs! What an interesting and inspiring article. Well done, Milla!

I noticed your links aren't titled - this makes it hard to know what you're clicking on.

vandalised

"Vandalised Dog Picture" will appear on the link box to one side of the page.

I'm also not sure about the "wink-wink, nudge-nudge" end of the entry. Maybe you could make it a bit less obvious - take out the .

Milla, I really enjoyed reading this!

It's entries like this which make the EG what it is.

Icy

Thanks all!

zeg, I will take your suggestions to heart! Will this show a title in the new window? Can one define the link to always open in a new window?

I even managed to make the images come up in a new window!
And the end bit is a little toned down. I hope...

Are everybody (is everybody? *foreign moment*) happy now?

*Eagerly awaits next steps*

An amusing and entertaining read, thank you Milla

Would you mind changing some of your GuideML tags to the standard for Peer Review Entries.

We don't use

Please use a at the beginning of each paragraph and a at the end of each paragraph.

We don't use POPUP="1" please delete those.

Please change dogs to dogs

We don't link to pages such as art I tried to find something suitable to suggest instead, but didn't find anything, maybe someone else will come up with a suitable suggestion.

You may find this page helpful 'Using Approved GuideML in the Edited Guide' A264520

Best of luck with this Entry

Emmily

I will! I couldn't find the right entry on how to use guide ML, thanks for your instructions!

Done!

that was quick

Emmily

This is the kind of Entry I adore, thank you

There's some minor spelling and punctuation stuff to attend to, but I think you'll find them on careful read through. The only thing I would request is a translation of what the AVK is. They sound a little like the Gnome Liberation Front in a way, perhaps you could sneak in a reference to them and this A10450964

I'm a little unsure of the last paragraph, as t seems to sit almost foreign of the tone of the piece, as do the headers. Something a little more quirky perhaps? No dramam if you can't think of anything though, lovely stuff, can't wait to see a dog sprout up near me soon woof!