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Peer Review: A813557 - Zildjian Cymbals

Post 1

Nullmuse/U161590

Entry: Zildjian Cymbals - A813557
Author: Nullmuse/U161590 - U161590

Ready for inclusion in The Guide: "Zildjian Cymbals"


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Post 2

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hello Nullmuse smiley - smiley

For the benefit of other Peer Reviewers, this entry has been in the Writing Workshop, the Flea Market, and Peer Review: F97257?thread=297119 is the previous PR thread.

Looks good to mesmiley - ok


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Post 3

echomikeromeo

My concern is that this entry seems too much to be advertising the brand. Lauding the age of the company and the superiority of their cymbals does not provide a fair and balanced account. Is there any way you could tone down some of the language so that it's not quite so biased?


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Post 4

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

could mention they cost about twice the price of other brands

agrees with EMR that it is rather adverty.


Some famous users / endorsees would be nice


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Post 5

Nullmuse/U161590

They're not that much more expensive than other brands.

Compared to a B8-Pro, yes, they are expensive, but this is a "shoe on the other foot" thing-- B8Pro's were designed as a 'cheaper student model' cymbal, not the otherway around.

A Ford costs mort than a Yugo. This doesn't mean the Ford is over-priced, it means that Yugo's are a cheap and crappy knock-offs.

At this point, I'm so frustrated with the entire H2G2 "peer review" process, the previous hijack of this entry and so on, that I never intend to contribute again. In my opinion, H2G2 is a wonderful concept with a completely flawed execution. This site could've been as popular as "MySpace" years ago, witgh support for mobile devices and so on. I'm not sure where exactly it went wrong, but it obviously has.

That said, if it's such a big issue that I'm promoting a specific brand, to me it makes better sense to just remove the "Zildjian" name from the article and make it a basic cymbal entry. Agreed?


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Post 6

Nullmuse/U161590

Six Days and No Feedback. I am given to presume the entry "Zildjian Cymbals" is fairly on-target.


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Post 7

MiniMy

hiya Nullmuse,

I agree with EMR. I find it a bit advert-y. Especially where their telephone number is mentioned. It does tell me about the cymbals though and is written well. smiley - ok

smiley - cheers
mini
smiley - zoom


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Post 8

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - erm

Entry is hidden.


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Post 9

echomikeromeo

Well, wasn't me...smiley - erm

I suppose we'll have to see if Nullmouse intends to do anything about that.


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Post 10

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - sadface 'kay...


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Post 11

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Still hidden -- should we remove this thread from Peer Review for now?

smiley - cheers
Mikey


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Post 12

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Seconded and added to Scout Databasesmiley - biro


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Post 13

Skankyrich [?]

Still here... smiley - smiley


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Post 14

Natalie

Gone!


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Post 15

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Thanks Natalie, unsubbing from this now smiley - smiley


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