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Peer Review: A813557 - Zildjian Cymbals
Nullmuse/U161590 Started conversation May 14, 2006
Entry: Zildjian Cymbals - A813557
Author: Nullmuse/U161590 - U161590
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A813557 - Zildjian Cymbals
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted May 14, 2006
Hello Nullmuse
For the benefit of other Peer Reviewers, this entry has been in the Writing Workshop, the Flea Market, and Peer Review: F97257?thread=297119 is the previous PR thread.
Looks good to me
A813557 - Zildjian Cymbals
echomikeromeo Posted May 14, 2006
My concern is that this entry seems too much to be advertising the brand. Lauding the age of the company and the superiority of their cymbals does not provide a fair and balanced account. Is there any way you could tone down some of the language so that it's not quite so biased?
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the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish Posted May 14, 2006
could mention they cost about twice the price of other brands
agrees with EMR that it is rather adverty.
Some famous users / endorsees would be nice
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Nullmuse/U161590 Posted Jul 4, 2006
They're not that much more expensive than other brands.
Compared to a B8-Pro, yes, they are expensive, but this is a "shoe on the other foot" thing-- B8Pro's were designed as a 'cheaper student model' cymbal, not the otherway around.
A Ford costs mort than a Yugo. This doesn't mean the Ford is over-priced, it means that Yugo's are a cheap and crappy knock-offs.
At this point, I'm so frustrated with the entire H2G2 "peer review" process, the previous hijack of this entry and so on, that I never intend to contribute again. In my opinion, H2G2 is a wonderful concept with a completely flawed execution. This site could've been as popular as "MySpace" years ago, witgh support for mobile devices and so on. I'm not sure where exactly it went wrong, but it obviously has.
That said, if it's such a big issue that I'm promoting a specific brand, to me it makes better sense to just remove the "Zildjian" name from the article and make it a basic cymbal entry. Agreed?
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Nullmuse/U161590 Posted Jul 10, 2006
Six Days and No Feedback. I am given to presume the entry "Zildjian Cymbals" is fairly on-target.
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MiniMy Posted Jul 10, 2006
hiya Nullmuse,
I agree with EMR. I find it a bit advert-y. Especially where their telephone number is mentioned. It does tell me about the cymbals though and is written well.
mini
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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Aug 12, 2006
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Peer Review: A813557 - Zildjian Cymbals
- 1: Nullmuse/U161590 (May 14, 2006)
- 2: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (May 14, 2006)
- 3: echomikeromeo (May 14, 2006)
- 4: the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish (May 14, 2006)
- 5: Nullmuse/U161590 (Jul 4, 2006)
- 6: Nullmuse/U161590 (Jul 10, 2006)
- 7: MiniMy (Jul 10, 2006)
- 8: Wilma Neanderthal (Jul 17, 2006)
- 9: echomikeromeo (Jul 17, 2006)
- 10: Wilma Neanderthal (Jul 18, 2006)
- 11: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (Aug 12, 2006)
- 12: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Aug 12, 2006)
- 13: Skankyrich [?] (Sep 24, 2006)
- 14: Natalie (Sep 25, 2006)
- 15: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Sep 25, 2006)
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