This is a Journal entry by Flamestrike

Poetry

Post 161

Khamsin

Night Pete!


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Post 162

Flamestrike

See you tomorrow Kham...


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Post 163

Ellen

Like the Love in All Forms one!


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Post 164

Lady Pennywhistle - Back with a vengeance! [for a certain, limited value of Vengeance; actual amounts of Vengeance may vary]

I like the Same Old News one better... probably becuase it speaks to me more (won't start that discussion here though, it isn't the place). But Love In All Forms has a very interesting structure.


Poetry

Post 165

Flamestrike

Especially if you read just the first line of each stanza... a smiley - erm well hate to say generic message, but for me love is wholehearted and like I said dedicated to the people who have found love in there life smiley - smiley


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Post 166

Flamestrike

Raindrops
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Raindrops on the window,
hanging and do not drop,
showing fragmentation,
of a back wall light,

Raindrops on the grass,
coating every blade,
running down and down,
pooling into mini lakes.

Raindrops on the mud,
soaking into the ground,
mixing merging until,
the mud sucks and drowns.

Raindrops falling from above,
pattering all around,
pounding whatever they hit,
with a hammering sound.

Raindrops made of water,
most mutable substance,
able to be in many forms,
while changing everything.


Poetry

Post 167

Spacecadet Jack (Supreme Commander in Cheif) [Major]

Is it raining by any chance? smiley - winkeyesmiley - tongueout


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Post 168

Flamestrike

It has been... but not right now smiley - smiley but probably will do again soon... just as long as it isn't when I am walking home smiley - sadface


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Post 169

Spacecadet Jack (Supreme Commander in Cheif) [Major]

Raindrops keep falling on my head smiley - nahnah


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Post 170

Flamestrike

Take away
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so much choice for the final meal,
of the night,
what do I want I do not know just,
not the same,
as the night before it was a donner,
but not now,
and a chicken kebab before I did fill,
so what else,
can I stuff myself to my hearts content,
what is that?

Will it be tasty or will it be foul,
do I risk,
something new when I can mix the old,
so I try,
a large praire dog with garlic butter,
and a little,
extra something to fill so donner on top,
with some salad,
and mayonaise to cap the craving for one,
night shift snack.


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Post 171

Scandrea

smiley - yuk Aren't there any late night pizza places?


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Post 172

Flamestrike

Well the place I go to does pizza too (and for 50p extra will throw a big pile of donner meat on top smiley - smiley)


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Post 173

Flamestrike

Well another horror poem (for those of sqeamish nature not as gory as last time... well just anyway smiley - winkeye)...

Mad Doctor pt1
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At last I have infallible way to get what I want,
nay what I deserve to have finally given to me.
For they called me mad and locked me away but now,
I am the one who controls life here in everyway.

Minds are now mine,
there will undone,
theft and murder,
my will be done.

So a few drugs and words all said in the right voice,
and then there mind will only listen to my lordly tone.
So my corruption spreads as I bring in more to control,
and soon they will all do whatever behaviour I condone.

The soul is corrupted,
they do what I say,
my control is complete,
mould actions like clay.

So in this prison they wanted me watched and kept,
under there doctors guidence for the public safety.
But instead this entire place of medical ignorance,
is under the auspices of myself the mad Doctor Fear.


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Post 174

Scandrea

I feel another epic coming on!


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Post 175

Flamestrike

planning to - I was inspired by a random comment on a talk show about conciousness.....


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Post 176

Sponge Rob Squarepants

I get the feeling You are bored at work Pete.... smiley - laugh


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Post 177

Flamestrike

Yes I am - busy but bored - well only an hour and 1/2 to go and a JD will be going down well as I start my leaving do drink...


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Post 178

Sponge Rob Squarepants

Leaving do..? you're only going to another department....

Tut tut any excuse for a pi$$ up.... smiley - laugh


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Post 179

Flamestrike

well I am leaving the team so a very good reason for a piss up smiley - laugh


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Post 180

Sponge Rob Squarepants

Yeah yeah yeah....*sigh*


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