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Sapna- Melt hearts NOT ice caps <3

we did feelings before


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Prof Animal Chaos.C.E.O..err! C.E.Idiot of H2G2 Fools Guild (Official).... A recipient of S.F.L and S.S.J.A.D.D...plus...S.N.A.F.U.

FEELINGS


I didn't know I could love
anyone as much as I love you
for the sound of your voice,
makes all my dreams come true.

You walk into a room, and
I know you have arrived;
my heart skips a beat when
you walk up to my side.

I hope this kind of magic stays
forever between us two,
and the whole wide world will
know that God sent me you.

(Author: Copyright 1996 Carol D. Meeks)


subject: Rock and roll

smiley - cool


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Sapna- Melt hearts NOT ice caps <3

that was beutiful


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Jabberwock


Sorry 'bout Feeling(s), Rocks, there's no actual rule against repeating subjects but you're right, the more variation the better smiley - ok
Jab smiley - smiley


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Snailrind

(I loved the 'words' one! smiley - laugh)


From ANDREW ELDRITCH IS GOD

And Eldritch said,
"Let there be eyes that shine through the violet haze
And the Body Electric flashing on the bathroom wall,"
And it was so.
And Eldrich saw that it was
Strange.
And there was evening, and there was morning--
The fourth night.

[Etc, etc...]

So Eldritch created Goth
In His own image,
In the image of Eldritch He created him;
Male and female
He created them.

Eldritch said to them,
"Be black and purple and increase in number;
Fill the city of Leeds, its low damp ground:
Make your painted faces glow."

[Etc, etc...]

Eldritch saw all that he had made, and it was
A joke.


(orig.)



Next: cream.


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Sapna- Melt hearts NOT ice caps <3

i did to


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Jabberwock

Hey - thanks folks! smiley - ok


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Post 148

Sapna- Melt hearts NOT ice caps <3

tour welcome it was a great poem


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Jabberwock


We listened to the best bits of Cream all morning.
I went out, forgetting my keys.
She was out too. Not able to get back in
I squeezed through the tiny open top of a window
With the bus queue watching,
Landing on the table
head first, my feet
Still sticking out the window
My keys
Falling out of my pocket.


Greed


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Snailrind

smiley - laugh


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kangalew oftimes Lew-- NEVER Louis!


Greed, hunger,
Cowabunga,
Fill my belly 'til I chunder;
Back for more, I roar,
I thunder,
"Feed me, 'til I burst asunder."
Kl.
Satisfaction.


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Snailrind

I love this thread. smiley - biggrin


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paulh, vaccinated against the Omigod Variant

After greed, what's the next topic? I finished the long poem I was working on, and am ready to rejoin this thread. smiley - smiley


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Jabberwock


It's Satisfaction, Paul - see 151. Welcome back smiley - ok

Jab smiley - smiley


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kangalew oftimes Lew-- NEVER Louis!


Greed, hunger,
Cowabunga,
Fill my belly 'til I chunder.
Back for more, I roar,
I thunder,
Feed me 'til I burst asunder.

kl.

Next..Satisfaction.


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kangalew oftimes Lew-- NEVER Louis!


Sorry about doubling up. I could not find where I was! kl.


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Jabberwock

OK smiley - ok Lew.


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Prof Animal Chaos.C.E.O..err! C.E.Idiot of H2G2 Fools Guild (Official).... A recipient of S.F.L and S.S.J.A.D.D...plus...S.N.A.F.U.

I can't get no satisfaction
no matter how hard I try
I can't get no satisfaction
my ex will not lay down and ...

hurt her elbowsmiley - erm


(minesmiley - evilgrin)


subject: coffee


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Post 159

Sapna- Melt hearts NOT ice caps <3

nice one
smiley - ok
a drink of coffee
the rudh has began
making you hyyper active
caich me if you can
jumping over tables
leaping over chairs
saying awfull swears
and kissinf bears
but finally it has gone
the taste is most delishous
with it being brown
i don't know what came over me

my own
next one=snow


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paulh, vaccinated against the Omigod Variant

Whose woods these are, I think I know.
His house is in the village, though.
He will not know I'm standing here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
to stop without a farmhouse near,
betwene the woods and frozen lake,
the darkest evening of the year.

He give his harness bells a shake
to ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
of easy wind and downy flake,.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep,

"Stopping by the woods on asnowy evening," by Robert Frost
(I have it committed to memory because I set it to music
some years ago smiley - winkeye.)
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