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Peer Review: A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 1

Rik Bailey

Entry: Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat) - A970959
Author: Muzaakboy - Better than the right thing is one who does it - U208494

Is this ok?


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 2

Cyzaki

smiley - yikes no comments yet?

smiley - panda


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 3

Cyzaki

I think you need to remove the pbuh every time you say mohammid (or however you spell it) as this is an encyclopaedia-like entry, not a muslim text.

smiley - panda


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 4

stjarna

I can't vouch for the accuracy of the information, but I did notice that there are a _lot_ of spelling mistakes (pillers/pillars, entrys/entries, compulsenery/compulsory, etc.)

Looks well structured though, although I'd remove the 'Introduction' heading after being advised to remove my initial heading in A2112238.


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 5

leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator]

Not sure what the purpose of this entry would be. Why would a non-Muslims want to know all this unnecessary detail? This sounds like a therapeutic posting on the lines of Justin The Preacher, and I don't personally think the Guide is the forum for preaching.


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 6

Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

I have to say that it does seem a bit like a cathartic exercise. Surely a lot of it could me summarised without quoting the litany in such detail?
Also, I've said this before: the rigid use of (pbuh) seems like some kind of stylistic tic. I know you feel you have to say it as it asserts *before other Muslims* your credibility as a believer (and good luck to you), but it gets in the way of your message. I assume you will be writing for non-Muslims, who don't feel they have to say (pbuh) after referring to Mohammed.


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 7

Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

Another point I want to make is the relevance of 'context' here. I feel it would be much more informative if greater attention were given to how it fits into the belief system of Islam. Don't forget, there are a very large proportion of lay people here, who don't necessarily believe in anything but who nevertheless find the social aspects of religion interesting.


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 8

leo mckern [space for random exotic word juxtaposition generator]

exactly
this is like someone posting of the Common Prayer Book
this isn't a site for saying this is what I believe
the author's name gives warning what sort of post it is going to be
I sincerely hope that in this form this entry does not enter the guide


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 9

Rik Bailey

Sorry but actually its not the complete way of doing prayer.

Don't worry I will change it to a different view point.

I'll make it about wht Muslim's prayer rather than how they actually do it.

No offence was ment, sorry.

Adib


A970959 - Overview of the five pillers of Islam part two (Salaat)

Post 10

Rik Bailey

I ment why Muslims pray rather than how.

Sorry I type to fast and I'm no good with my English grammer and spelling. honest

Adib


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