A Conversation for The German Invasion of the USSR

A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 121

spook

Atari - i'm doing a h2g2 university roject on the two world wars, and i was wondering if, when this entry is finished, u'd like to remove it from peer review and include it in the project. then, once the project is finished, your entry would become edited. what do you think?

spooksmiley - santa


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 122

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

smiley - ok
How?


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 123

Noggin the Nog

Hi Atari.

I suggest that the last part of the Blitzkreig section be rearranged.

There should be a para break after <..taking Kiev> followed immediately by the first part of the Operatio Typhoon paragraph (to ...Nazi hands) then cutting back to The first hard frosts gave the Nazis a final chance to take Moscow (they actually reached the outer suburbs)- that takes you to
The Russian counteroffensive started on December 5.

This puts the elements into their proper order.

Noggin


And I'm still not sure what para 3 in this section is supposed to convey.


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 124

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Hi Atari,

A Scout has recommended this for inclusion into the Edited Guide, and I was wondering if you're close to this being ready to be accepted.

Jimster


A900064 - The German invasion of the USSR

Post 125

Rho

Well done, Atari! smiley - biggrin


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 126

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!
Just a minute! smiley - smiley


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 127

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

I'm ready! smiley - biggrin


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 128

Z

Yup Well done!!!! smiley - bubblysmiley - stiffdrink


A900064 - THE GERMAN INVASION OF THE USSR

Post 129

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

smiley - magicsmiley - biggrin


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 130

h2g2 auto-messages

Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 131

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

Thanks DNA! smiley - biggrin


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

Post 132

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

*Waits for entry to get edited*

You know, this is my first EE i've done. I'd just like to say thanks to the countless amounts of people that helped me make this what it is now!smiley - biggrin

P.S. Saturnine; did you get your entry edited after all?


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