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Entry: Ealing - A5983680
Author: ssbookworm12488 - U730741

this is my first proper attempt at writing an entry about Ealing, if anyone has any ideas for its improvement, or any factual knowledge about ealing that should be included please let me know.

As soon as i have a chance i intend to put more factual knowledge in this, but any suggestions are welcome,

thanks

Is there any history?

You might want to rearrange the headers, putting sections about what to do in Ealing or things to see, or notable sights under a group heading.

Hi SSbookworm,

Adding dates to your "develeopment" section (within the text) would help give some historical aspect. You could then flesh it out a bit with information on what Ealing was like at different times in history.

I agree also that a little more organisation of the touristy/shopping aspect would help.

If you need any assistance with anything, give us a shout - though you vertainly seem to know what you're doing



W

cool thanks for the comments,

i might be able to do some rearranging now but more of the historical stuff will probably have to wait until i've done my A level exams, since unfortunately im not doing an A level in the History of Ealing,

sarah

Take your time, Sarah, and with the exams.
W

thanks,

in just under three weeks ill be free! until then im slaving away... lol

How's it going? You've got the makings of a great entry here. The only thing I'd suggest is perhaps a little more about present-day Ealing - I'm sure you know lots of things that an outsider wouldn't...

There's a few suggestions on writing entries of this kind over at A1286921, in case that's of any use to you.