A Conversation for Scottish Music - "Loch Lomond" is Not the Only Fruit

Alternative Writing Workshop: A43480 - The Scottish Music Enigma

Post 1

Cosmic

Entry: The Scottish Music Enigma - A43480
Author: Cosmic - U33715

This is my first article. I was about to submit it fo review but then I realised that it doesn't quite fit the "Try to make your entry balanced" guidline. What dop folk think?


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Post 2

LL Waz

It doesn't seem particularly unbalanced to me but you'd probably have to tone it down somewhat for the Edited Guide. You might get less argument on that score if you changed the title to something along the lines of 'Is 'Loch Lomond' all there is to Scottish music?', making it clear the entry is about something other than the usual conception of traditional Scottish music.

Is it the Edited Guide you're aiming for?

What would you class Paul Mounsey as, out of interest? I love his music.
Waz


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Post 3

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

http://www.frtommylane.com/homilies/year_a/19-2.htm

a little research wouldn't hurt, either...
smiley - popcornsmiley - run


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Post 4

Cosmic

Fair enough but the tune is the one associated with Scotland. It's origins are not entirely known but all it was most likely written in america in the late 19th century.

Slainte

Paul

http://www.olympia.anglican.org/churches/seattle/trinity/hymns/671.html
http://www.baptiststandard.com/2002/12_9/pages/amazing_tune.html


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Post 5

Cosmic

Good advice - thanks for that. I am aiming for the edited guide if I can. As far as I can see there is nothing on this subject as yet.

Paul Mounsey is great. Definitely a "Folk" section guy. A Scotsman with Brazilian (and other) influences. He's just released a new album!

Slainte

Cosmic


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Post 6

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

One link says 1835.
Predating the usefulness of the Negro Spiritual tradition by a couple of decades, at least, since the Fisk Singers didn't begin touring until, if I remember correctly, 1871?

Don't mind me, just being nitpicky.

Carry on.smiley - ok


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Post 7

sprout

If you are looking to head for the edited guide, then it will need to be called something like "Why Scottish traditional music isn't" and then explain (as you do) why this misnomer exists. You might have to cut out some of the judgements and make the tone a little bit more neutral. Good point though.

Sprout


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Post 8

Cosmic

Fair enough - I'll modify it.

smiley - cheers


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Post 9

Cosmic

Ok, I'll change the title - thanks for that. It is a little ambiguous. I'll just send it for editing and see if I get it bounced back or not. Thanks for all the advice!

Slainte

smiley - cheers


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Post 10

LL Waz

Good luck, and thanks for telling me about the new album. I found and ordered it today smiley - cheers.

I'll watch how this goes in PR,
Waz


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Post 11

Miranda (Make tea! Yes, Cissdur, it's still me)

Interesting entry! smiley - ok Just one thing: I realise you didn't intend to write an entry about Scottish Folk music, but I still miss some concrete examples at the end there - bands, singers, instrumentalists, or perhaps tunes or styles? I'm not sure, I just feel there is something missing.You're saying a lot about what _isn't_ proper Scottish music, and I'm left with the question: What _is_, then? smiley - smiley

M


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Post 12

Cosmic

Good point - which I did realise (honest) after I'd written it. It's been turned down for the edited guide as it's a rant (fair enough) so I will write another, slightly nicer article about what the music really is all about!

Thanks for the comment!

Slainte

Cosmicsmiley - cheers


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Post 13

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

Post a link here, please, when you do!


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Post 14

Miranda (Make tea! Yes, Cissdur, it's still me)

Looking forward to reading it!

M smiley - cheers


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Post 15

Cosmic

On the advice of those in PR, it has been toned down and expanded. Check it out and I'd welcome more comments!

Slainte

Cosmic


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Post 16

Miranda (Make tea! Yes, Cissdur, it's still me)

I like it! The entry seems much more balanced now. And it answers my question! smiley - smiley This time I was left with a wish to check out those performers you mentioned. And I suppose that was your intention! Nice work!

M smiley - musicalnote


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Post 17

Cosmic

Thaks for that. It makes me feel all warm and fluffy...

Slainte

Cosmicsmiley - cheers


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Post 18

Miranda (Make tea! Yes, Cissdur, it's still me)

smiley - biggrin Glad to hear that!

M


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