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Post 1

Mina

Entry: Bedlam - The Hospital of St Mary of Bethlehem - A2428238
Author: Mina - please help us choose!! F1770359?thread=395453 - U290

My latest London entry.

It's come out quite long, so if I've put in too much information about other bits of London (I vaguely suspect I have) I'll whip them out again.


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Post 2

Mu Beta

An intriguing and informative entry, Mina. Very nice indeed. smiley - ok

One of those Guidely topics where everyone knows just a little bit, but has to look up all the associated detail.

And I can't even find any errors. Damn.

Well, I found a very small one: 'Abraham ward' should be either 'Abraham Ward' or '"Abraham" ward', depending on your precise meaning.

It might also be worth mentioning that digitalis is commonly known as the foxglove.

B


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Post 3

Number Six

I saw one - royallty, I think it was smiley - winkeye

It could be a very long and time-consuming road to go down, but might it be worth mentioning famous Bedlam 'residents'? I can't think of his name right now, but I know there was one painter in particular who spent most of his life there. If it's any help, I think he had a long first name and a short second one...

smiley - mod


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Post 4

McKay The Disorganised

Subscribes and waits for Mina to "whip them out" smiley - bigeyes

smiley - cider


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Post 5

Mina

I took 'ward' out, as I don't think it's normally capitalised, and I'd said it once already, and I've changed that typing error.

There is a huge amount of artwork in the museum that was done by inmates, I didn't recognise any of them as 'famous'. smiley - blush I will go back and add some in the bottom section later.

I tried to find some famous visitors as well, but I only came across one - Dr Johnson.


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Post 6

Mina

I might not get this done today, btw, but I'll get to it asap.


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Post 7

sprout

If I remember well, Pepys visited Bedlam and included quite a graphic description in his memoirs. Any chance of a quote from this in this entry?

sprout


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Post 8

Number Six

Richard Dadd, that's him.

smiley - mod


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Post 9

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Informative read smiley - ok

One typo I spotted was

"Other additions included a , great dome"

Reckon that comma escaped from somewhere smiley - winkeye

smiley - ale


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Post 10

Mina

Perhaps I had a rather longer list of adjectives there at one time. smiley - winkeye

I'll have some time to fix that, and maybe add a short bit about famous 'residents' this weekend. smiley - ok


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Post 11

Sho - employed again!

most excellent and informative entry.

smiley - ok


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Post 12

Mina

I've removed the stray comma, and added a tiny bit about the artists that were admitted to the hospital. smiley - ok

Any other comments?


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Post 13

Mina

I found a link to an h2g2 entry on one of the links I just added. I love it when that happens!


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Post 14

Smij - Formerly Jimster

The title alone told me something I didn't know.

Well done you!


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Post 15

Mina

smiley - blush

Thank you!


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Post 16

Mina

Ooh, I found some sort of sound file on a Beeb page. I haven't got the software to be able to listen to it, but it's called The Curse of Bedlam and is here - http://www.bbc.co.uk/education/20cvox/health.shtml

Would someone mind listening to it, to see if it's worth linking to the page?


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Post 17

Pinniped


Great Entry!
One comment - you describe Dadd as a watercolourist, but his best-known works (eg The Fairy-Feller's Masterstroke, Titania Sleeping and others in the Midsummer Night's Dream series) are all in oils.


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Post 18

Mina

Ah. Now, the pictures at the museum are described as watercolour. I'll just whip that bit out. smiley - ta


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Post 19

Pinniped


Hi Mina!

I thought I'd better check. Of thirty-odd important works by Dadd while an inmate at Bedlam (between 1844 and 1864), only the 'Sketches to Illustrate the Passions' and 'Crazy Jane' are watercolours. The rest are oils, or else pen-and-ink preparatory sketches for unrealised paintings which were intended for oils. Dadd's masterpiece, the Fairy-Feller's Master Stroke is oil on canvas, and was painted at Bedlam. It took nine years to complete. A remarkable litany of tales surrounds it, and it could certainly carry a Guide Entry in its own right. Now there's a thought...

I'll say it again : this is a great Entry. Sometimes, with the right subject, a dispassionate and careful explanation serves to amplify the reader's discomfiture. This is a good example.

Pinsmiley - ok


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Post 20

Mina

I must have misunderstood or mis-read my source. Although mis0remebered is more likely. smiley - biggrin

Thanks for your comments, sometimes people see things I didn't intend. I'll still take the credit though. smiley - winkeye


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