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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

as for leicester:

I see what you mean - however he's jst come from being cattified at stone henge seems strange that he wouldn;t want REVENEGE NOW, if you see what I mean.

However, I've been thinking (always dangerous) is there maybe a way he could track the Agency down through the computers at the Town Council, hacking into the MI6 database - let that be the way he tracks them down....


smiley - erm


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Post 22

Mr. Legion

Sounds good. Or he could be acting on the tip-off from someone that the Scudthorpe Town Council is a front for the Agency. Or the Triads. Can we bring the Triads into it somehow? smiley - biggrin

I thought the summation was grand. Maybe something more about the mysterious Jamaican woman in the dream, and whoever 'He' is that Annabel was going to see. Apart from that...can't think of anything.


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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

sorry had to stop for a bit to negotiate a bank loan (reading thru' the small print with dad.)

now where were we?


ah yes.


hmmm me espies a plot forming. so under the nose of old lady woman, leicester hatches a plot to hack into the town councils archives to find out the location of the agency...how about while they are there (I have visions of Tim knocking out a few guards en-route to the servers...) they also bring up the police database...and see that the Bizmark Fetishists are currently languishing in the local penitentiary...tim and leicester agree to break them out if they'll sign up to the attack on the agency.

The Fetishists currently de-mob happy in accountant suits and magistrates outfits..ask first to be dropped off at the warehouse where they have a) blimps and b) those little helmets with the spike on them! smiley - biggrin


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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

A1150002

Check out that page once more. I've put it all into guideML rather than PlainText; tidied up some of those paragraphs which were dragging the pace of it down too much and I've also, in the biggest change, amalgamated the two pages together - and I think it works rather well shifting from the Review straight into the advert.

It may not be smiley - thepost-ready just yet but it's getting there! smiley - ok


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Mr. Legion

Looking good. I guess the great steamer that is Storytime III will be hoving out of port soon...


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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

Ideedy! smiley - biggrin

I've been ever so busy today multiple trips to the bank to sort out a loan + all the hassle of applying for a job...oooh me poor little feet!

smiley - footprints

anyhoo, off to bed now. smiley - sleepy but I'll be working on it some more but I think it's more or less sorted now. I'll send it over to Shazz, see who else turns up and then Gods willing H2G2ST III wil be go! smiley - ok


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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

ooh missed the point about the woman in the dream and the 'He'

I'll get those put in before long don't panic! smiley - ok


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Don't mind me... just subscribing...


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The Dying Pilchard Bleeds Under The Turquiose Moon...


I could see the Turquise moon as the diamond which concentrates light onto one spot ala Indiana Jones...


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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

smiley - biggrin

The Turqoise Moon as a diamond really put a smile on my face when it occured to me.

Who has it , who wants it, what is it for? so many possibilities. smiley - zen


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Erm... the reincarnating monk who has gone into the body of the blue fish/'red herring' from chapter 1 of 1....


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...or bring back Rasputin on 'parole'


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Mr. Legion

I like it. Could then work in a museum heist, too. And maybe some comedy Dutchmen. What is it that the Cult actually *want*? Once we know that, plot should fall into place...

Ooh! If the Pilchard conspiracy is based in Switzerland - and it is, right? That is where Arthur and Guy were sent originally, isn't it? - then we've got to have a bad guy named von Trapp. One of the kids from The Sound of Music who grew up *bad* smiley - laugh

smiley - musicalnote"The hills are alive, with the sound ofsmiley - musicalnote...your doom! Mwahaha!"


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Mr. Legion

Rasputin should, I think, stay dead, or only make a cameo appearance. I really like the ending we gave him in Storytime II, so anything further would just be wrong.


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I am in firm conviction that the cult should be morris dancers and mime artists intent on destroying peace and harmony with their evil....


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Swedish morris Dancers...


#Theeeeeeeeeee.... Hillls are aliiiiiiveeee with sound of knee bells...

The 'your doom' could be a cheesy after line...


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Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

The bad Von Trapp smiley - devilsmiley - laugh!!!

As for the morris dancers..we could always have the monks divisions...("Forward my Breatheren - stay true to our cause, but remember - do try to blend in")

Prussian Goatherders. smiley - biggrin

Hmm Rasputin stays dead I think, ditto Boutros et al. I'd toyed with the idea of having cameos for them (Great characters though they were )but I'm not sure how it'd be worked in and furthermore if it suits the 'spy' themed thriller - 'cos I mean we've got two really great plot devices so far in that regard: Arthur and X tracking down the Cult - wherever they are and whatever they are up to. and Leicester plotting his attack against the Agency and teaming up with the Bizmark Fetishists. smiley - biggrin

Museumheist - what particular item was it they was stolen? *thinks* the map to the temple of the pilchard - directions inscribed on the back of two stone tablets?

ooh so exciting.


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The Pilchard Tablet... once placed in the right place it bleeds the directions onto a large map on the tomb/temple floor that leads to the Turquoise Moon...


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Isn't that a good idea four months later?


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Post 40

Clive the flying ostrich: Amateur Polymath | Chief Heretic.

missed that one...

hmmm. smiley - evilgrin


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