A Conversation for The Flying Scotsman

A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 21

parrferris

Very readable and interesting entry.smiley - ok

Only a couple of comments:
- You need to explain the phrase 'Pacific'
- After going to great lengths to explain the correct terminology, you later confuse matters by stating "By 1969 Flying Scotsman was the only steam train running on the main line..."
- Oh, and I'm also dubious about the Waterman connection. Was he really co-owner in 1973?

I can actually remember travelling behind 4472 during its stint on the newly-launched Torbay Steam Railway (as it then was) back in about 1974, when I was 3 years old!


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 22

Galigan

Ah, thanks Parrferris. The Pacific Bit's going, I'll probably put it into the first section. The Pete Waterman bit has been confirmed earlier in this conversation I think. It wasn't actually in the original entry.


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 23

Serephina

Are you happy with this now? smiley - smiley


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 24

Galigan

I am if no-one's got anything else to add. I think it's perfect.smiley - smiley


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 25

U168592

hmm, let me think.

There's...

Nah, I think it's pretty shiny too. smiley - goodluck


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 26

Serephina

cool


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 27

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

I've got no problems with it smiley - smiley


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 28

Serephina

smiley - ok


A9955993 - The Flying Scotsman

Post 29

McKay The Disorganised

I like it too smiley - ok

I used to have The Duchess of Montrose, back in the days of 3 rail Hornby 'oo' smiley - erm wish I'd kept it.

smiley - cider


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Post 31

Galigan

Woohoo!smiley - biggrin


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Post 32

U168592

Don't you mean Woo Wooo choo choo choo chug cugga pssshhhhhhhhh?

smiley - winkeye

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Post 33

Galigan

smiley - winkeye


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Post 34

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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