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Alternative Writing Workshop: A601372 - A visit to Dachau

Post 1

Pinniped

Entry: A visit to Dachau - A601372
Author: Bob Dodd - U180609


Long-forgotten (?) and very poignant.
I very nearly re-posted this to PR, but it doesn't need that sort of critique, does it?
It needs a hush, and humility.


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Post 2

Sneaky

Has this been featured anywhere yet? If not it needs to be. I'm left speechless after reading it. Too bad PR rejected way back when, it's exactly what the EG needs. Not that it would have a snowballs chance now, but it would be nice to see it go in. Well, that's what us UGlies are around for. Lacking that, there's <./>thepost</.> or <./>agggag</.>.

smiley - aliensmile giving the new name a shot...<./>underguide</.>


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Post 3

J

I think a big push could get it into the EG I believe, but it's not worth it, eh?

A very effective piece. Pin and Sneaky said it.

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 4

nullspace

I visited the Dachau camp on a February day in 1975.

Miserable.
Grim.
Haunted.

Took the better part of a bottle of Jack to wash the stain off my brain.

It's "Arbeit Macht Frei", BTW.

The details are well presented. Good work.


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Post 5

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

As this one is on the front page today, should it still be here in the AWW?


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Post 6

J

Sure smiley - smiley As a compromise with some other AWW groups, the UG doesn't move entries from the AWW unless the author wants to.

(by the way, I wonder what happened to the acceptance post smiley - erm I shall have to have words with my co-eds...)

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 7

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

> As a compromise with some other AWW groups, the UG doesn't move entries
> from the AWW unless the author wants to.

I can see that making sense, but for this one (and for so many other AWW entries, it seems), the author doesn't appear to have been around in some years.

I don't get the same urge to make things neat and tidy in the AWW as I do in PR, though -- just saw this on the front page today and thought I'd ask.

smiley - cheers


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Post 8

J

Hey, the treaty leaving UG entries in the AWW ended a war, Mikey smiley - biggrin
This bit doesn't have much to do with the author when he's an elvis. It's about appeasing certain people smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 9

Pinniped


Minesweeping no longer on the agenda, then, Jodan?
Though this particular piece is among the best examples of why we should just leave things as they come to be.
Lest we forget.


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Post 10

UnderGuide Editors

Congratulations! This piece has been picked from the Alternative Writing Workshop (AWW) by our miners and has been accepted by the editors for inclusion in the h2g2 UnderGuide!

Due to a hiccup in the system this message is a little late and the entry has already been featured on h2g2's front page and will very soon be displayed on the shelves of the UnderGuide Archives at A2112490 and the site's official archives at C1233.

More information on the UnderGuide can be found at the <./>underguide</.> HQ should anyone want it.

Thank you for the contribution to the UnderGuide! It can only exist as long as people write for it and search out the entries for it smiley - bubbly.


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Post 11

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

Which reminds me. Any of you smiley - clownsmiley - clown want to throw together a CAC Continuum any time soon?


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Post 12

LL Waz

This weekend hopefully,

Waz smiley - brrsmiley - clown


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