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Entry: Olave Baden-Powell - A4523780
Author: Cyzaki - Join the (un)official F1 supporters' club A1918244 - U223973

I knew nothing about Olave Baden-Powell before reading this, so can't comment on the content, but it's clear, interesting and reads very well - nice one

Just a couple of things I spotted:

Paragraphs 4 and 5: there are three 'however's quite close together here which jarred just a bit (the first such sentence in particular could perhaps begin with an 'although' instead?)

>>Between 1942 and her death, she travelled the world as many as 5 times, taking 653 flights to do so<< Do you mean 'travelled right around the world'? Just 'travelling the world' is a bit vague.

Tiny things, in other words I enjoyed it.

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Urm... was this finished? I was actually waiting for more comments about what of Mizzpinky's suggestions should be included, but if you think it's ready as it is then fair enough!