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Peer Review: A4177334 - 'South Park' - The Televison Series

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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

Entry: 'South Park' - The Televison Series - A4177334
Author: GodBen-The god of doors, ducks, eunuchs, and car dealerships ( O-> ) - U518809

OK, I've tried to keep this as clean as I can.


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U168592

Very informative. smiley - smiley You spelt entirely wrong. Unless that's how it's spelt at the start of the show. Been a while since I watched.
Froodsmiley - wizard


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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

The spell checker doesn't work if you type entirly in capitals.

smiley - huh

Bugger. smiley - sadface


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Mu Beta

I like. smiley - ok

Perhaps it would be worth pointing out that the majority of shows do actually have a good underlying moral message for this day and age - remember the Sexual Harrassment Panda?

B


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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

smiley - ok Good idea. I've put in a little bit about that.


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McKay The Disorganised

I like it smiley - ok

I think it might be as well to put in a footnote about Terri Schiavo - 12 months from now people may not be so familiar with her tragedy.

I can see this thread becoming a listing of peoples favourite episodes (The Lord of The Ring one)

smiley - cider


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Mu Beta

Chicken F*cker for me. smiley - biggrin

Although the film is best of the lot. As Ben rightly points out, it's a really twisted but brilliant Broadway musical.

B


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Casa Bonita... awesome smiley - biggrin


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Phred Firecloud

Best thing I've read in weeks. A gem!

smiley - blackcat


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Mu Beta

It does need a going-over for the occasional typo.

B


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Post 11

U168592

Yeah, seeing as the title is spelt wrong smiley - sadface It's television...smiley - tongueout


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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

Argh, that MS Word spell-checker is useless! smiley - grr

I rewrote that Terri Schiavo part so that it wouldn't date, and added a footnote to explain her story.

As for favourite episode, I'll have to go with 'Red Sleigh Down'. I love the bit where Jesus is being searched by the Iraqis and says "I have something to tell you, Jesus is packing", and he pulls out a gun and shoots them both in the head.


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Post 13

U168592

Is it worth mentioning Matt and Trey's 'musical' about the cannibals? It was live action, but for the life of me can't recall it's name smiley - erm sorry. But it was the funniest thing I'd seen for ages smiley - smiley


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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

I think you mean 'Cannibal! The Musical'. I decided to leave that out as this is an entry on South Park, and not on Trey and Matts work. smiley - erm


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U168592

That's cool! smiley - biggrin I think perhaps it deserves an Entry of its own, by god, I laughed so hard my spleen burst. smiley - somersault

(ok, maybe not, but I was close to incontinence)


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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

Well I went through the entry, rewriting parts to make them easier to understand. I also redid the "warning" at the top to make it in a black table with white writing, but I'm not sure if that's allowed in approved GuideML. smiley - erm


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U168592

I think it looks great and should be kept that way, but someone will probably tell you not to, or to leave a note to the Sub-Editor when it gets picked or something equally as difficult for everyone involved. smiley - sadface


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U168592

oh and of course anyone with a pda/mobile won't be able to read it. So perhpas you best change it back.


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GodBen (The Magical Astronomer) - 00000011

They wont be able to see the whole page, or just the table?


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U168592

Just the table smiley - smiley

If you change the format of your hyper link to read pda in the section that reads brunel or alabaster or classic then you can see what it looks like on a pda/mobile. smiley - smiley

Does that make sense?


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