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Peer Review: A403886 - Hertfords Restaurants
sun seeker Started conversation Jul 23, 2003
Entry: Hertfords Restaurants - A403886
Author: sun seeker - U126896
A pocket guide to eating out in Hertford.
A403886 - Hertfords Restaurants
. Posted Jul 23, 2003
Quite a handy entry, although I have to say I think you should go into more detail.
The first person "I" and "we" will have to be removed from the entry, I'm afraid. You know the sort of thing, instead of saying "we have" say "there are". 
Maybe you should mention all the restaurants in each section instead of just what you reckon to be the best. You could use dot points, write a little about what each one serves, what its speciality is and even where it's located (although I'm not sure on the last point). If any of the restaurants are old you could write a little about the history of the building/family that owns it/or something like that. 
You should probably link to the entry on pizza: A137657
Niwt 
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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Sep 10, 2003
Hmmmm... the author hasn't back since entering this one in PR.
Not technically a "one day wonder", as the author was around before that, but I still have a feeling this one is headed in a Flea Marketly direction....
Mikey
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Cyzaki Posted Sep 30, 2003
The author has left the building - flea market?
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Number Six Posted Sep 30, 2003
Yeah, there's enough to go on here...
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Number Six Posted Sep 30, 2003
Could you? It suddenly got very busy at work this afternoon... watch the news on Wednesday and I predict you'll see why!
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Peer Review: A403886 - Hertfords Restaurants
- 1: sun seeker (Jul 23, 2003)
- 2: . (Jul 23, 2003)
- 3: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (Sep 10, 2003)
- 4: Elephants? Or Just Niwt? (Sep 16, 2003)
- 5: Cyzaki (Sep 30, 2003)
- 6: Number Six (Sep 30, 2003)
- 7: Cyzaki (Sep 30, 2003)
- 8: Number Six (Sep 30, 2003)
- 9: Cyzaki (Oct 1, 2003)
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