h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hiya,

My exams are all over thankfully, now trying to get my brain back, it sort of disappeared when the exams finished, hopefully when it recovers it will come back.

S

Hmmmm.... our bookworm doesn't seem to have returned to hootoo since her exams ended -- hopefully she'll come back to this soon!


Mikey

hiya,

sorry, been away alot this summer, and then pc decided to stop working, which was helpful, so only just been able to get back to h2g2.

i am going to have another look at my entry, and all the very helpful suggestions made for its improvement before i get bogged down with A level work.

great! make sure to stop by and let us know when you've had a chance to do that, and we'll all come have another look at it.

Ah! Good to have you back ssbw Give us a shout when you've updated your entry

i have updated some of it, many getting changing the opening sentence of my entry, and getting rid of some of the rogue capital letters, and changing some minor errors.

Still cant get the links to work, so for nwo they can just appear as plain text until i can get them working, so at least people can see them.

Found some other articles to reference with, but dont understand how to do that either, so will have to wait until i have the opportunity to get my head round GuideML.

If there is anything i have missed in the entry, i am sorry, but i have lost track of what i have done and what i haven't.

Thanks

hiya.

a good informative article. Just a bit in the Slah and burn section. I think a few words are missing form this sentence:
"Slash and burn Most sustainable of the farming methods, but only if ..."

I live in Malaysia and during the dry months we get terrible haze - because of our own pollution and and the slash and burn method practised by Indonesian farmers. The smoke gets blown over the straits and the air gets quite unbreathable.

mini

thanks,

It looks like the 'What are the causes?'>>'Fuel' paragraph could use revision.

- "This is needs a lot of land because you need to grow crops in different areas.common in developing countries where there are often no readily available alternatives." - the first sentence doesn't really seem to belong here, and it looks like the beginning of the second sentence is missing.

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Congratulations - a good entry - well done

Speller

Aha! Well done

well done!

mini

thank you for all your help.