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Peer Review: A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
Ice Queen Started conversation Feb 11, 2004
Entry: Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge - A2201419
Author: Ice Queen - U250243
Couldn't find appropriate guide references, only websites. Is this alright?
A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
frenchbean Posted Feb 11, 2004
Hello IceQueen 
On first sight this looks good 
I'll read it properly in a while and get back to you 
Frenchbean
A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
Z Posted Feb 11, 2004
Good work!!! this is an excellent entry 
There are a few small things, would you like me to point them out, but overall it's very good...
A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
McKay The Disorganised Posted Feb 14, 2004
I like it.
A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
frenchbean Posted Feb 15, 2004
Hello again
This is a good entry. Take all my wee comments as constructive - none of them are major issues at all...
You don't need to have a sub-header for
>one of whose lanes go through<->one of whose lanes goes through<
>(Tourist Information)< is repeated twice
Explanation of what NSW stands for can go as a footnote
>a historical suburb<->an historical suburb<
Your link to Bridge Climb could actually be put in where you first mention the bridge climb at the top of paragraph 5, rather than in brackets at the end of that paragraph.
That's it!
F/b
A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
Dinnerlady [The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom]William Blake. Top lad:) Posted Feb 18, 2004
One comment - call me anal if you like 
- taxis - does not have an apostrophe for a plural.
Mel
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Congratulations!
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Gordon, Ringer of Bells, Keeper of Postal Codes and Maps No One Can Re-fold Properly Posted Mar 5, 2004
Yes, congratulations, indeed!
This will be a nice addition to the EG.
Cheers!
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SchrEck Inc. Posted Mar 16, 2004
Hi Ice Queen,
I've been given your wonderful entry to subedit, and the result is at A2384642. If you spot something that needs attention, please drop me a note. 
SchrEck Inc.
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Ice Queen Posted Mar 20, 2004
Thankyou all for your input..... So this is what happens when I go away for a couple of weeks.
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Peer Review: A2201419 - Methods of crossing the Sydney Harbour Bridge
- 1: Ice Queen (Feb 11, 2004)
- 2: frenchbean (Feb 11, 2004)
- 3: Z (Feb 11, 2004)
- 4: McKay The Disorganised (Feb 14, 2004)
- 5: frenchbean (Feb 15, 2004)
- 6: Dinnerlady [The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom]William Blake. Top lad:) (Feb 18, 2004)
- 7: h2g2 auto-messages (Mar 4, 2004)
- 8: Number Six (Mar 4, 2004)
- 9: Gordon, Ringer of Bells, Keeper of Postal Codes and Maps No One Can Re-fold Properly (Mar 5, 2004)
- 10: SchrEck Inc. (Mar 16, 2004)
- 11: Ice Queen (Mar 20, 2004)
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