A Conversation for Spoof Wars: Return of the Parody

Peer Review: A14569716 - Spoof Wars:Return of the Parody

Post 1

Br. Megachedda-I've found my apostrophe key!!!

Entry: Spoof Wars:Return of the Parody - A14569716
Author: Megachedda - U4934604

Hiya this is my first entry and i think ive finished it, ive put it into egww and it seems finshed so i thought id post it here.


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Post 2

Beatrice

Well done at having a go at writing a Guide Entyr.

Thhis game sounds like fun (albeit maybe at bit too intellectual for me), but I'm not sure I fully understand it from the description given here. Could you maybe give some more examples from actual games you've played yourself?


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Post 3

Secretly Not Here Any More

I'll have a proper look over this and give you some feedback Mega, seeing as this entry seems to have sunk down the list!


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Post 4

Leo

Interesting idea. smiley - erm Anyone have thoughts on this?


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Post 5

Fizzymouse- no place like home


I like it Mega, but I'd change the his/her to their.smiley - ok

I also think you need more examples ... could there be a movie game where titles are parodied ... if someone gives you the clue - Christmas at Amity the title would be - The Santa Jaws, or Guy Fawkes at Hogwarts would be Hairy Plotter .... or have I got the wrong end of the stick entirely.smiley - rolleyes

Well done so far.smiley - applause


smiley - mouse


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Post 6

TRiG (Ireland) A dog, so bade in office

Short and simple, which is fine. It covers its subject adequately. And the title is perfect. It is, as Gnomon suggested in the WW conversation, a parody itself, and it also sounds like a competition, which is as it should be.

One thing: insert a space after the colon.

TRiG.smiley - smiley


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Post 7

Br. Megachedda-I've found my apostrophe key!!!

I think you have the wrong end of the stick fizzy, its a game for general parodying and not a specific topic, but i suppose it could be played as a specific topic gae if it was wished.


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Post 8

Fizzymouse- no place like home



smiley - laugh Well - there's a surprise. smiley - winkeye


Don't mind me.smiley - whistle


smiley - mouse


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Post 10

Secretly Not Here Any More

Well done!


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Post 11

Terran

Congratulations smiley - coolsmiley - cheers


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Post 12

Br. Megachedda-I've found my apostrophe key!!!

My first edited entry!Im so proud.smiley - biggrinsmiley - bubblyfor everyone!!!


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Post 13

Fizzymouse- no place like home



Well done you .... and lay off the smiley - bubbly


Have some smiley - milk


smiley - applause


smiley - mouse


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Post 14

Br. Megachedda-I've found my apostrophe key!!!

Just a bit, pleeeeeeeease?smiley - grovel


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Post 15

Fizzymouse- no place like home



Well, just a sip since it's your first entry ...... but don't be getting a taste for it.smiley - bubbly



smiley - hug


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