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Peer Review: A13081916 - How to (or not to) travel in Dhaka.

Post 1

Isa

Entry: How to (or not to) travel in Dhaka. - A13081916
Author: Isa - U4846932

Revised my older article. Also can anyone suggest a better title for it?


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Post 2

Trin Tragula

Oh wow - this is great stuff, Isa smiley - ok All the interest of the original version you wrote, but much fuller and more thorough. Needs a bit of polishing in places, but this is a fine Entry smiley - smiley

I like the title, I'm afraid, so... no. No suggestions smiley - biggrin


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Post 3

Wilma Neanderthal

Hey! Nice one, Isa. Very rounded and well researched. You bring the atmosphere to life smiley - ok

Are you in the mood for learning how to format this is Guide ML - to give you some smiley - cool headers etc, or would you prefer to have your sub Editor do it (if and) when your entry is picked for the Guide?

We all had to learn to do this at some point and I am hoping this is the first of many entries for you smiley - winkeye Want to try? We can help you.

smiley - ok
Wilma


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Post 4

Isa

Yes plz... id love some help on that. i have no idea what guide ML is and i dont know how to add colored headlines and such. Id appreciate it very much


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Post 5

Wilma Neanderthal

OK, you asked for it smiley - winkeye

When you go into the edit page, scroll down a while and change the style to Guide ML.

Lesson One: To make your headings stand out, do the following

Rickshaws

If you want sub headings for sub-sections, you do Rickshaws

Lesson Two: To make paragraphs, you need to start with and end with for each paragraph.

Try those two first and see how you go.

smiley - ok
W


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Post 6

Trin Tragula

Eventually, the whole thing should look like this:




This is a paragraph

This is a heading




Simple as that smiley - ok


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Post 7

U168592

smiley - wow Great read! smiley - ta

It's a fine idea to try and pick up GuideML too smiley - smiley

*muttesrs something about the fact sub-editors are there to polish up excellent writing like this to EG standard, but then munches on his donut to muffle it all*


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Post 8

U168592

Oh, but if you get into it, here's a section of the Guide that might help A395552

It covers GuideML in a round about way. Just ask for pointers from most of the people in Peer Review though if you get stuck smiley - ok


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Post 9

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

Great piece of writing,smiley - ok, i think the title is good as it issmiley - winkeye.

i found it quite fun learning GuideML (though i still don't know much), you should give it a go.

SPsmiley - winkeye


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Post 10

laconian

I really like this kind of entry smiley - smiley. But there are a couple of points:

In 'Rickshaws':

'It’s basically a try-cycle made of beaten tin'. Should be 'tricycle'.

'One must know exactly where one is heading and how far he/she would have to go'. A bit mixed up. 'how far one would have to go' would be better.

Good luck with your GuideML-learning smiley - smiley.


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Post 11

aka Bel - A87832164

Great entry, Isa, love it smiley - ok


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Post 12

Natalie

How's this one going?


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Post 13

Wilma Neanderthal



It needs some work and the author seems to have taken off smiley - sadface


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Post 14

Natalie

Hello there all,

Though this needs formatting and so on, I think there's enough positive feeling about this article for us to move ahead with it. We'll take a note of this thread and be sure that those in the editing process are made aware of it/willing to undertake the task. smiley - ok

smiley - cheers

Natalie


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Post 16

aka Bel - A87832164

Congratulations Isa smiley - bubbly


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Post 17

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - applause well done, Isa!


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Post 18

laconian

Congratulations indeed. A truly great entry.
smiley - applause


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Post 19

steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah>

WELLL donesmiley - oksmiley - modsmiley - cake


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Post 20

Isa

Ok now this is cool. Sry about taking of like that but my pc blew a fuse and its difficult enough as it is wit my exams. Thanks a lot. Im working on a new article but is there nething i need to do about this one?


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