A Conversation for The Shoulder - The Unique Joint

Peer Review: A12130273 - The Shoulder - A Unique Joint

Post 1

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Entry: The Shoulder - A Unique Joint - A12130273
Author: Galaxy Babe - Scout/ACE - U128652

U158503 Friar (elvised) wrote all this, I've tidied it up from 5 entries to the old Uni which wasn't completed. Happy to hear suggestions, alterations, typos, etc. I've left a note on Friar's PS in the hopes he joins us here.

Submitted 30 May


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Post 2

Mu Beta

Damn! Why did I think this was going to be about pork roasts?

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Post 3

U168592

smiley - laugh

we had lamb the other day. Nothing like a good shank.

smiley - book

Will return smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - laugh

Oh no, not more innuendo! smiley - headhurts

smiley - biggrin


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McKay The Disorganised

OK - I know nothing of this - however regarding the title - I've got two of them (shoulders) so I don't think they're unique.

What about The Shoulder - A joint alone.

smiley - cider


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Post 6

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - biggrin


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Post 7

Pinniped


I know someone who's had a shoulder hemiarthroplasty, which is when they replace the ball on the end of the humerus but leave the socket in the scapula alone. This isn't very useful information, but I don't get too many chances to prove I know words like hemiarthroplasty.

Americanism : All TMS devotees will confirm that rotator cuff tears are caused by throwing cricket balls, not baseballs.

I suppose I'd better say something sensible after all that :
There's a bit in the Musculature section, the first sentence about the serratus anterior, that needs checking. The words there seem to have got mixed up.


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - biggrin
Thanks Pin smiley - smiley

Changed baseball to cricket (and linked to a cricket entry)smiley - biro

I didn't understand that about the serratus anterior either, so I'm glad you mentioned itsmiley - winkeye
I've reworded it, as best as I could.smiley - biro

There seems to be some repetition, do you think it could be pared down somewhat?


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Post 9

AlexAshman


Nitpicks:

smiley - friedegg You need to explain more of the movements of the shoulder joint, namely medial and lateral rotation, extension, flexion, so that lay readers can understand.

smiley - friedegg A mention of Erb's palsy would be good - actually you could do with mentioning the brachial plexus, as it's kinda important in shoulder damage.

smiley - friedegg It's worth noting the most common direction of dislocation of the shoulder due to its structure, and that dislocation can damage the axillary nerve leading to weakness of the deltoid and teres minor.

smiley - friedegg It would be interesting to note which of the muscles give the anterior and posterior folds of the axilla, so that readers can get a better idea of where the muscles are on their own shoulder / armpit.

smiley - friedegg "Sharing a common sheath with the supraspinatus tendon, bursitis often mimics tendinitis." - I take it you mean that as the subacromial bursa, which lies beneath the supraspinatus tendon, has a common sheath, bursitis often mimics tendinitis.

Alex smiley - cake


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Thanks Alexsmiley - okI was hoping someone medical would turn upsmiley - winkeye

Updatedsmiley - biro


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Post 11

FordsTowel

I thought it was a great idea for an entry, GB, even if it had to be rescued to see it to fruition.smiley - biggrin

Nicely done!smiley - ok

That said, I might like to see a couple of things done, if you find them worthwhile.

1) the shoulder consists of a system of three interconnecting bones, ligaments and muscles.
This might, momentarily, give the unlearned the impression that there are either three of each (bones, ligaments, muscles), or three total.
Perhaps dropping the three, or numbering each of the others will clarify it just that tiny bit more.
Or, 'the shoulder consists of a system of three interconnecting bones, several ligaments and groups of muscles. ' or some such.

2) Re: base vs cricket balls
I suspect that repeated use of the arm for throwing any handy objects would do the same thing, of course; which would, therefore, include throwing rocks, bottles, etc. as in rioting or facing off militia.smiley - doh
Maybe a list of the types of throwing that are likely to create the damage instead?

smiley - towel


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Post 12

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Thanks Fordssmiley - towel

Updatedsmiley - biro


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Post 13

U168592

Dislocation of shoulder and elbow joints are common in toddlers smiley - winkeye


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Post 14

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Do you want me to put that in the entry Matt? or are you joking?


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Post 15

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - doh the penny just dropped - sorry Matt.

Toddlers+throwing things repetitively = dislocation.smiley - headhurts

Think I'll go make myself a smiley - teasmiley - whistle


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U168592

smiley - laughsmiley - winkeye

Actually I'm serious as well smiley - smiley

Dislocation of joints is common in young 'uns as they are still developing. Many present to GPs and Emergency Departments from the ages of 13 mths to 3 years with dislocate elbows and shoulders smiley - nurse and lots of parents fret. But there is nothing to fear, it is comon smiley - biggrin


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aka Bel - A87832164

It's well known here, too, I think it even has a name of its own, but I can't recall what it is, something with 'father' in it, if I recall correctly ( from walking at the father's hand, trying to stray apart to some dangerous place ( like the road, for instance)and relatively abruptly being pulled back.


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Post 18

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

It's strange, I've had 4 children and practically raised a grandson and I have never heard of thissmiley - yikes


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U168592

'Pulled Elbow' is more common, but shoulder does happen.


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Post 20

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - okadded, thanks smiley - smiley


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