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Entry: The Perfect Pot Noodle: How to turn a Snack into a Meal - A775046
Author: dogsounds - U197325

All feedback welcomed; although I would recommend trying the technique before condemning it!

I suggest you read the <./>writing-guidelines</.> and adjust appropriately. An interesting subject, and I won't condemn it, but things like first person references are 'condemned'

I'll see if I can find energy to try it

H.

* waits for H. to report back *

You might like to link to this: A143650 although it appears to be one of those earlier entries that snuck into the guide without have much information in them.

This is a feasable way of making a decent meal from a pot noodle (at least, decent in terms of stopping you being hungry)- and alternative is pot noodle sandwiches. Again, it is important to ignore the fill level.

I liked this I haven't even got a Pot Noodle and I'm salivating at the vivid descriptions. I agree the link to the other Pot noodle entry would be worthwhile.

A1037783 A Knob of Butter may also be a practical link when you mention this vital quantity.

tpoys:
connossieur > connoisseur
should be though of as > should be thought of as
so that yo can watch it > so that you can watch it
Resist temptaion for a good five minutes > Resist temptation for a good five minutes
when the bread is surfaced > when the bread surfaces
what many consider > what can be considered (unless you can provide evidence that this is the case)


hope these suggestions help
Pimms

Dogsounds, if you take out the first-person references (those couple of 'me's - it shouldn't be too hard to find a way to write around them...) I'd say this is looking good!

Cheers,
Number Six

I reckon we can take this on - not too much work for a sub or us in-house.

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Well done dogsounds! Have a slap-up meal of and

Pimms

spelugx

Cool beans!

Thanks for all the feedback folks. Yes, a few schoolboy spelling errors there - can't understand how I didn't spot them. Oh well. I'm a victim of a mis-spelled youth.

I obviously hadn't picked up on the rules about first-person perspective - gah. Well, if you are happy to tweak it in-house, feel free! I'll know for next time.

Finally, I hope those of you who tried the recipe thoroughly enjoyed it - your lives will be somewhat shortened, but heartily fulfilled!

Cheers all

Foxx