h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Goshen, CT USA - A679241
Author: Galen the Scout! - U187629

i put this entry in the peer review, but i know that it is not at all ready for it and i want to get it ready

The first thing I notice about your entry is that it is written in American English. Edited Guide Entries are supposed to be in British English. The main things are:

rotary should be roundabout
stop lights should be traffic lights

I don't know whether changing this to British English will make it look better, since it is about an American town.

You should explain what CT in the title means. Is it Connecticut? This should probably be spelt out in full, rather than using the abbreviation, since most people don't know what the abbreviation means.

You will need an introduction. This can be just a few lines at the start saying something like: Goshen is a little-known town of about 500 people in western Connectictut, USA. It is on the main route between the equally little-known towns of Torrington and Cornwall (or whatever is appropriate).

thank you, i am going to change that right now.
i do not think i mentioned cornwall, do you know the area?

No, I don't know the area at all. But I am able to look at a map!

yes...
i see. i made all but the intro for now, and that will come soon

thank you
-Galen

Reading further in your article, I am amazed. Does the library really have stuffed animals that you can borrow? Is this normal for American libraries or is it something special that only your library does? I think it is unusual enough that it probably deserves its own entry "Libraries: more than just books".

yes, it does have stuffed animals, along with (i think) games

i will drop by the library next week and look at the unusual things they have.

no, it is not normal, i dont know whyu ours does

Mine had LPs when I was a child... But it's highly abnormal.

yes, mine has no music wierdly enough

hello sir bossel, just wandering through?

stay a few and have a cup of

Oh thank you but at this time of day I'd prefer a before going to

you post at the same time as me!

you can have your and i will have my ?

Ok

although at this very moment, I guess it's just the other way round

hmm... how so, it is night here now, it appears that you went on at night also from the posting time being what i thought was the same time both days...
oh well, ?

Author elvised - back to entry time?

Seconded, added to list.