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Triolet competition

Post 1

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

We ought to have a competition for the most trivial triolet. smiley - laughsmiley - erm


The breakfast triolet

Post 2

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

The bacon was burnt
While I coddled the eggs.
But what is to be learnt?
The bacon was burnt
'Though belief it begs
The bacon was burnt
While I coddled the eggs.


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Post 3

Hypatia

The three-legged dog
Stole a bone from the cat.
He's really a hog,
The three-legged dog.
He hid behind a log
Near the place where she sat.
The three-legged dog
Stole a bone from the cat.


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Post 4

Titania (gone for lunch)

*struggling with the triolet metre*

Isn't it supposed to be 8 lines?smiley - huh

A1
B1
A2
A1
A3
B2
A1
B1

I'm working on one, I'm working one on... *chewing virtual pencil*


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Post 5

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

Oh yes. smiley - silly me. I'll have another go.


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Post 6

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

The bacon was burnt
While I coddled the eggs.
But what is to be learnt?
The bacon was burnt
It should have been turned
'Though belief it begs
The bacon was burnt
While I coddled the eggs.


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Post 7

Titania (gone for lunch)

It's raining outside
I'm staying indoors
I just want to hide
It's raining outside
I'm staying inside
not going outdoors
It's raining outside
I'm staying indoors

Oh dear - it *does* sound trivial, doesn't it?


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Post 8

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

That is truly trivial, Titania.

I love Hypatia's naughty dog. smiley - laugh


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Post 9

Hypatia

smiley - biggrin

From the looks of things, we all three need to get a life. smiley - laugh

what the heck is a coddled egg, anyway? Is it what we call poached?


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Post 10

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

They're a bit like poached eggs but each egg is placed in a container first.


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Post 11

Asteroid Lil - Offstage Presence


My computer's so slow
I'm playing mahjongg.
This download won't show!
My computer's so slow
It's taking so long!
My computer's so slow
I'm playing mahjongg.



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Post 12

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

smiley - laugh

You've made the same mistake I did, Lil. There should be eight lines.


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Post 13

Asteroid Lil - Offstage Presence


Dang! That's what I get for copying your paper! smiley - laugh

My computer's so slow
I'm playing mahjongg.
This download won't show!
My computer's so slow
I watch my nails grow,
It's taking so long!
My computer's so slow
I'm playing mahjongg.


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Post 14

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

Well there we have it. The thrilling lives of the Salonistas. I think Titania's is the most trivial so far.


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Post 15

Hypatia

Agreed. Incredibly trivial. smiley - laugh


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Post 16

Asteroid Lil - Offstage Presence

We'll have to get chai wallah to judge.

My cats are asleep
curled up on the bed.
A big furry heap
curled up on the bed.
It's not a big leap
and they're feeling well-fed.
My cats are asleep
curled up on the bed.


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Post 17

Hypatia

smiley - biggrinsmiley - catsmiley - sleepy


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Post 18

Confusing Manifestation

I just can't fall asleep,
Though I'm really quite tired,
All collapsed in a heap,
I just can't fall asleep.
If I don't get some sleep,
I'm afraid I'll be fired,
I just can't fall asleep,
Though I'm really quite tired.

This is a really fun form!


Things that go bump in the night

Post 19

Amy the Ant - High Manzanilla of the Church of the Stuffed Olive

Endless fun!


I switched on the light
When I heard a noise
In the dead of the night
I switched on the light
I got such a fright
And quite lost my poise
I switched on the light
When I heard a noise




Triolet -1

Post 20

FordsTowel

Boredom--
I’m typing a poem
On an old keyboard
I’ve nowhere to roam
I’m typing a poem
On a computer at home
Because I’m so bored
I’m typing a poem
On an old keyboard


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