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Peer Review: A1036027 - communication difficulties
reg/petro Started conversation Apr 29, 2003
Entry: communication difficulties - A1036027
Author: Researcher 225598 - U225598
some of the difficulties which i have come accross, within the use and aplication of everyday forms of communicating to other people.
A1036027 - communication difficulties
Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted May 1, 2003
Hmmm... This is an interesting piece, but I'm thinking that it might be better situated as a journal entry, or maybe as regular old guide entry from your personal space.
Here in Peer Review, we're working towards getting entries in shape for the Edited Guide -- have you had a chance to look at the Writing-Guidelines yet? They might give you a better idea of what we're looking for.
It's not that there's anything wrong with your entry -- it's just that it's about *you*, it's a personal entry, and so it's better suited to your personal space. Entries that go into the Edited Guide, on the other hand, tend to be much less personal and more communal -- for example, they don't use first person -- no "I" or "me" or "my".
Mikey
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Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted May 2, 2003
I'm agreeing with Mikey here. Nothing wrong with the piece, hwoever it's really in the wrong place. If , on the other hand, you wanted to re-write it as a general piece (providing there's not another entry on the subject - don't know - I've not checked), it may then be suitable.
What do you think?
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reg/petro Posted Jul 4, 2003
Fair enough, if its in the wrong place then its in the wrong place, when i fiqure out how to move it, then i will. thanks for your comments, and i will see what i can do. i suppose that it may well have come across as being of a rather personal nature. i am still new to this site, which is my only excuss for being rather bad at it. Sorry, but thanks agian for the tip.
Reg/Petro.
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J Posted Jul 4, 2003
Don't be sorry, everyone makes this sort of mistake when they're new
You can remove it by clicking the 'remove' or 'x' button next to your entry on the PeerReview page
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Cyzaki Posted Aug 15, 2003
Have you thought any more about moving this entry? Maybe you could look into submitting it for the Post?
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Bob McBob Posted Aug 16, 2003
Yes, get it intt <./>ThePost</.>, I'm sure they'd love to have it. Or you could put into the Writing-Alternative. There seems to be the normal stuff in there at the moment.
You may also like to change this to GuideML, so you can put headings in. Look in the help for info, or leave me a message and I'll get back to you (around christmas, but I'll get back)
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FordsTowel Posted Sep 26, 2003
It could be made 'edited guide' possible by taking out the first-person flavour. Start by just changing all of the 'I' references to 'you' and straigten the grammar appropriately.
Good Luck,
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GreyDesk Posted Oct 27, 2003
As the author is having some trouble removing this from PR (a digibox issue perhaps?) Do you think we should give them a hand?
Propose move back to entry.
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Peer Review: A1036027 - communication difficulties
- 1: reg/petro (Apr 29, 2003)
- 2: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (May 1, 2003)
- 3: Zarquon's Singing Fish! (May 2, 2003)
- 4: reg/petro (Jul 4, 2003)
- 5: J (Jul 4, 2003)
- 6: Cyzaki (Aug 15, 2003)
- 7: Bob McBob (Aug 16, 2003)
- 8: Cyzaki (Sep 26, 2003)
- 9: FordsTowel (Sep 26, 2003)
- 10: GreyDesk (Oct 27, 2003)
- 11: GreyDesk (Oct 30, 2003)
- 12: Geggs (Oct 30, 2003)
- 13: GreyDesk (Oct 30, 2003)
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