A Conversation for Oldsmobile: The rise and fall of the 'Little Car That Could'.
Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Tonsil Revenge (PG) Started conversation Mar 21, 2006
Entry: Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't - A9805836
Author: (TonsilRevenge) Soon to be wearing an "April is Autism Awareness Month" tattoo. - U186749
The latest installment of Tonsil's history of the woild... as he sees it...
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Tonsil Revenge (PG) Posted Mar 23, 2006
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
U168592 Posted May 16, 2006
I think it reads well TR. If you believe you're ready to cope with PR, then pop it in! Only suggestions I have are -
Could do with some Headers to break it up a bit.
Some more EG links (but I push those, because that's my MO)
MJ 
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
U168592 Posted May 16, 2006
Oh, and the title is a bit of a mouthful! Perhaps just:
Oldsmobile - The Little Car That Could?
With the question mark, to infer that maybe really it couldn't 
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Tonsil Revenge (PG) Posted May 17, 2006
Ahh! I'll consider it. But it still lacks that certain something.
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Tonsil Revenge (PG) Posted May 17, 2006
Well, I don't know if I did any good, but I changed some stuff and added some stuff.
Thanks for your interest. It was inspiring.
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
U168592 Posted May 17, 2006
Looks good to me 
I'd whack it into Peer Review myself, but you might want someone else's opinion before you subject yourself to that
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Tonsil Revenge (PG) Posted May 17, 2006
Thanks. I don't think it's anywhere near complete. There's a whole pile of stuff that's missing and I'm not too happy with the sentence structure in a few places.
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
U168592 Posted May 17, 2006
Well I read it through okay, but I'm happy to read 'Chat' magazines, so fair dues
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Number Six Posted Oct 29, 2006
Any progress? I like what there is of it, so far...
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Tonsil Revenge (PG) Posted Feb 7, 2007
Anybody remember how I get it out of here and into PR?
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
U168592 Posted Feb 10, 2007
YOu go to the main EGWW page and click on the little x to take it outta here. Then you should get your Submit for Review button back again on the Entry. Click this and submit to PR...simple as that
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
U168592 Posted Aug 10, 2007
No luck moving it yet then!
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
FordsTowel Posted Jul 28, 2008
So....
This looks pretty ready to me, too. Is it PR bound? Or, are you dropping the whole thing? 
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
AlexAshman Posted May 20, 2009
How come this is still in the Edited Guide Writing Workshop? You ought to remove it from here, and then submit it to Peer Review if you want to.
Alex
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
AlexAshman Posted Jul 7, 2009
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
Bluebottle Posted Jan 3, 2013
I'd like to propose Flea Market as the author has 
ed. Shame as this article definitely had potential.
<BB<
A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
h2g2 Guide Editors Posted Jan 5, 2013
Moved to Flea Market
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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A9805836 - Oldsmobile: The Little Car That Could Became the Middle Car Company That Couldn't
- 1: Tonsil Revenge (PG) (Mar 21, 2006)
- 2: Tonsil Revenge (PG) (Mar 23, 2006)
- 3: U168592 (May 16, 2006)
- 4: U168592 (May 16, 2006)
- 5: Tonsil Revenge (PG) (May 17, 2006)
- 6: Tonsil Revenge (PG) (May 17, 2006)
- 7: U168592 (May 17, 2006)
- 8: Tonsil Revenge (PG) (May 17, 2006)
- 9: U168592 (May 17, 2006)
- 10: Number Six (Oct 29, 2006)
- 11: Tonsil Revenge (PG) (Feb 7, 2007)
- 12: U168592 (Feb 10, 2007)
- 13: U168592 (Aug 10, 2007)
- 14: FordsTowel (Jul 28, 2008)
- 15: AlexAshman (May 20, 2009)
- 16: AlexAshman (Jul 7, 2009)
- 17: Bluebottle (Jan 3, 2013)
- 18: h2g2 Guide Editors (Jan 5, 2013)
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