A Conversation for Hagel - A Dutch Speciality

Peer Review: A944912 - Hagel - A Dutch Speciality

Post 1

tourdelux

Entry: Hagel - A Dutch Speciality - A944912
Author: Wotchit. It's a bit late, but it's snowing! - U197053

A short entry on this Dutch bread-topping. Serve and enjoy!


A944912 - Hagel - A Dutch Speciality

Post 2

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Yum! Is there a link showing a picture? This would complement the entry.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A944912 - Hagel - A Dutch Speciality

Post 3

Rho

Nice entry! smiley - biggrin

My only suggestion is very minor - putting the main list items, for example, "Chocolade Hagel" in bold at the end.

RhoMuNuQ


A944912 - Hagel - A Dutch Speciality

Post 4

Hapi - Hippo #5

Very good&complete!
Minor comments (typo?)
bescuit should be beschuit (I trust none will forget butter?)
Chocolade Hagel should be Chocoladehagel (! Chocolade vlokken is indeed correct)
Vruit Hagel should be Fruithagel
fruots should be fruits.


A944912 - Hagel - A Dutch Speciality

Post 5

tourdelux

Thanks Hapi. I don't know how I managed to spell beschuit wrong twice but thanks anyway.


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Post 6

Hapi - Hippo #5

smiley - biggrinsmiley - cheers


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Post 8

Rho

Well done, Wotchit! smiley - bubbly

RhoMuNuQ


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Post 9

tourdelux

Thanks Everyone! smiley - cheers

Wotchit


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Post 10

Rho

smiley - cheers

It's a great entry! smiley - biggrin

RhoMuNuQ


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