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Writing Workshop: A931772 - When can we be friends?

Post 1

Zed

Entry: When can we be friends? - A931772
Author: James - U215421

Any thoughts?


A931772 - When can we be friends?

Post 2

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

How about turning it into paragraphs?


A931772 - When can we be friends?

Post 3

Zed

That better?


A931772 - When can we be friends?

Post 4

Atari - Tok'ra (With my symbiote Jullinar)

I can read it now, but i'm not sure what the entry is supposed to be about!smiley - erm Are you new? Do you know what Peer Review is?smiley - erm


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Post 5

U195408

you say "rude is the new polite" according to a certain TV critic.

who is this TV critic and why did he say that? Can you give us some background?


You also say something about the "Warbling Throat Mangrove" sketch? What is this? Can you give some background, and why 2 friends would "run" through it?

I think that would help. Thanks,

dave


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