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Entry: The surprisingly awesome museum of osteology - A87816775
Author: demosthenes - U14999864

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Note to demosthenes:

Take some time to read a few of our other Entries in the Guide, so that you know how long your Entry should be.

You should have an introductory paragraph - a short description of the purpose of the museum, where it is located and the sorts of people who would find this museum interesting and educational.

Then a section with paragraphs for all the various departments, describing them accurately.

A final summary of why this museum is worth a visit..

Do not use the first person in your writing. (eg 'I think...')

Lanzababy

Hi there and welcome to h2g2!

I wanted to say first off that I LOVE the title, even though I had no idea whatsoever what osteology is. So thanks for that explanation.

I agree it still could do with some expanding. I've found a couple of different entries about museums for you. Now, every museum is different, but the headings might be useful. And as you can see they aren't all that long. So: The Explora Museum, Frankfurt A16991463 and The Museum of Questionable Medical Instruments, Minesota A592968 and Dublin's Dead Zoo A22691469

Being able to handle the bones is very cool.

Alas I don't think there's enough here to rescue, so I'd like to propose Back to Entry.

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