A Conversation for The Friends Of LD's Writing Competition

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Post 21

Loup Dargent

romani:smiley - ok

well done...smiley - biggrin

smiley - surferyou can claim your competition entry badge now...

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 22

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

smiley - taloup ive gtg now so I,ll do that latersmiley - ok

I thought that particular entry might interest yousmiley - biggrin

see ya all later

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 23

Loup Dargent

romani: smiley - ok

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 24

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

im thinkin of doin some more on other forms of dowsin 1 at a time o course but in the meantime I want sum advise on the pendulum 1.....do you think it would be good enough for review ?

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 25

Loup Dargent

romani: go for it...
smiley - cheers
loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 26

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

smiley - starloup

smiley - ta

gtg now talk later

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 27

Loup Dargent

smiley - ok..
yep... to go a bit further with what i said, i don't think they will find something THAT informative anywhere on here...
so yep... go for it...smiley - biggrin

talk later...smiley - surfer

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 28

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

smiley - taloup

but it would now seem its no good for peer review ,ve suggested the postsmiley - ok

I tried to keep it as simple as I could so that others who wanted to try it could have a dabble & maybe ask questions

oh well never mind I might win the comp with it insteadsmiley - laugh

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 29

Loup Dargent

hi romani...

i've read spiff's answer...
he did say that it was only his opinion...
the encyclopedia reference is wrong anyway as even encyclopedias must have a section on dowsing and so on...smiley - whistle

information is information... wait to see what the others there say... it's still up to the scouts to pick it up and the editors to accept it for the edited guide...

if it doesn't for some obscure reason fit with a too traditional official guide there's still the unofficial one... and of course the post which is ok too...

smiley - surfertalk soon...

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 30

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

smiley - taloup

I did,nt realise I thought the 1st reply you got was it......its the 1st time ive submitted anythin 2 peer.....so yes i,ll wait n c wot any others ave 2 saysmiley - ok

talk later

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 31

Loup Dargent

romani: yep they're supposed to help you making it an entry that can be accepted into the edited guide...

the main problem is will the format as an edited version will have your approval really...

but if it's picked up by a scout then someone will sub-edit it and obviously you will have a say...

i just can't see why an entry on pendulums can't fit in the edited guide...
there are some edited entries about the paranormal/unexplained etc.. [tho' quite lame if you ask me...smiley - biggrin]

will have another look at what he said... just to make sure...

talk soonsmiley - surfer

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 32

Loup Dargent

yep... had another check...

he mentioned that a few changes might have to be made... but once again it's from his own criteria [he said it himself]...
[and from someone who thought it was about clocks...smiley - biggrin]

smiley - starworth asking what kind of changes would be needed...

i have to go offline... [want to check on LD for a while too...smiley - biggrin]

talk soon...smiley - surfer

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 33

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

loupsmiley - towel

well a scout as looked at it & they seem 2 think it would b ideal 4 the post too.......but now im not sure as 2 whether 2 do some more work on it cos there is so much more i could add,,,,but then thats gonna make it a bit more complicated 4 the novice readersmiley - steam

anyway i think ive decided 2 remove it from peersmiley - ok

talk later

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 34

Loup Dargent

hi romani...

yep i read the scout's comments... i also read your entry again... tho' i don't agree that dowsing is only a belief i suppose a few "it is believed" at some stategic points might do the trick... obviously the how to use the pendulum would not be affected as it's a "how to" section...

the main problem i see is if you want to add more info you gonna have to fight with the digibox and make it a two part entry...

at least the scout's comments were more constructive than the first one... they were giving advice on how to make your entry fit the edited guide criteria... so there is an interest...

quite a lot to think about...

obviously you can send this version to the post and come back one day with another version for the edited guide...

talk later...smiley - surfer

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 35

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

loup

ive just bin talkin 2 owlatron n he says i should leave it a while longer n not withdraw it so i think i,ll leave it 4 now at leastsmiley - ok

i need 2 change it in2 guide ml anyway i 4got 2 do thatsmiley - biggrin

ave u decided wot ur gonna write bout 4 this next comp yet ?

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 36

Loup Dargent

yep... good idea... the feedback is better already anyway...

for the other question... i kinda answered it on the competition No3 thread... i'm trying to decide between two ideas...smiley - biggrin and i'm still trying to decide...smiley - laugh

talk later..

loupsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 37

St Romani Angel Guardian of Crystals. Minister of Coffee now on the decaff!!

loupsmiley - ok

good luck wi wotever u decide anywaysmiley - biggrin

ive gtg now so talk later

smiley - run

romanismiley - angelsmiley - disco


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Post 38

Loup Dargent

smiley - ok.. talk later..smiley - surfer

smiley - fullmoon


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Post 39

owlatronas

sorry posted on the wrong convos

A865712 is my new entry but it is a work in progresssmiley - ok

andysmiley - bat


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Post 40

Reality Manipulator

Hello I hope I am not too late as this is my first time, I am not quite sure which competition I am entering in for. So here is my contribution that I quickly wrote tonight. As a late comer it will take a while for me to get used to the rules. I am not very good at writing and do not have the standards that you have.

A87094 My thoughts and memories of Doctor Who.

I am very sorry if I have hurt anyones feelings by the things I have said earlier on.

Jedi Apprentice aka Katrine


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