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Peer Review: A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 1

Two Bit Trigger Pumping Moron

Entry: Offices of the Inspector General - A827570
Author: Two Bit Trigger Pumping Moron - U35376

Another entry about federal law enforcement.


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 2

McKay The Disorganised

Is there a gun-toting enforcement agency for every piece of legislation in America ?

smiley - erm or is that just me ?

This reads like a list, and a lot of the names mean nothing this side of the pond. Perhaps a one liner on what each office does ?


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 3

Two Bit Trigger Pumping Moron

The thing is that they each deal with pretty much the same thing but they do it for different agencies.

There are a huge number of federal law enforcement agencies with a very limited range of laws that they enforce. You can see the whole list at A642494.

smiley - handcuffs


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 4

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

It does seem to be not much more than a list with a brief intro smiley - erm Is there nothing else you can think of to pad it out Two Bit?


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 5

Ashley


This has been scouted for the EG - anything else you want to add TBTPM?

Ashley smiley - ok


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 6

Ashley

Hello

As I haven't heard either way on this entry, I am going to err on the side of caution and leave it in PR for a little longer.

Ashley smiley - ok


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Post 7

Ashley

Hello

As I haven't heard either way on this entry, I am going to err on the side of caution and leave it in PR for a little longer.

Ashley smiley - ok


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 8

Two Bit Trigger Pumping Moron

Please do. I see something glaring that I need to fix.

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Post 9

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Let us know when you've done it, Two Bit! smiley - smiley

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Post 10

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

smiley - erm Hem!

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Post 11

Cyzaki

You still working on this, two-bit?

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A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 12

Cyzaki

Two-bit?

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Post 13

Cyzaki

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Post 14

HappyDude

*coughs*


A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 15

Two Bit Trigger Pumping Moron

I've been avoiding Peer Review since I came back to the Guide. I went back and had a look at this. I tried to do something with it. Have a look and see if you think it's worthwhile.

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A827570 - Offices of the Inspector General

Post 16

HappyDude

Looks good to me

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Post 18

HappyDude

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Post 19

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

About time! smiley - bubbly

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