A Conversation for Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Peer Review: A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 1

EggsER

Entry: Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA - A803738
Author: EggsER - U199587

I'm sure I have missed something or spelled it wrong so please let me know.


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 2

Jimi X

Does the kids' clothing company have anything to do with the town?

Also, while you give a good background on its history, how about more on the town today (places to eat, fun fairs or events, stuff like that)

This is a great start, but I think I'd like to see a bit more. smiley - smiley

smiley - cheers

- Jimi X


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Post 3

EggsER

Will work on this somw more soon. The kids cloths is Oshkosh B'Gosh, they make overalls and kids cloths.
Thanks for the encouragment.


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 4

Z

Hello I was wondering if you'd made any progress with this? if not or it is going to be some time could you please remove it from PR and re post when it's ready again, you can find out how to do this at...

DontPanic-ReviewForums


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 5

Z

Sorry that should be http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/DontPanic-ReviewForums


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Post 6

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

You can do it like this Z...

< . / >DontPanic-ReviewForums< / . >

Only, take out the spaces <./>DontPanic-ReviewForums</.>

See? smiley - biggrin


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Post 7

Z

smiley - doh I knew there would be a way!


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 8

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

smiley - biggrin

Read the first part of <./>NamedEntries</.>

I can't cut'n'paste it here because... well, you just try it smiley - winkeye


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Post 9

Z

Thanks... everytime I think I've mastered Guide ml I realise I'm compleatly wrong!

smiley - magic
Z


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 10

The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away

Will you be doing any more work on your entry Eggs? It shows a lot of promise, and it would be a shame to see it abandoned.

Gosho


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 11

Dr Hell

ditto...



HELL


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Post 12

EggsER

Sorry for not checking more regularly, work speeds up here in Fall.
What still needs to be done, is my question. I will take another look and get back to you.


A803738 - Oshkosh, Wisconsin, USA

Post 13

Gordon, Ringer of Bells, Keeper of Postal Codes and Maps No One Can Re-fold Properly

Hi...

I'd move the "for more information" bit to the end.

The fly-in is for the Experimental Airplane Association who have a website at http://www.eaa.org. (When I visited it just now, the random quote about flying at the top of the page was by DNA (!))

Cheers! smiley - stout


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Post 14

Sam

Hiya EggsER,

Hope all's well! How's it going with the entry? Gordon's made a suggestion or two (see above) and when you get back and do that final bit of dusting and polishing we'll be only too happy to accept your entrysmiley - cheers into the Edited Guide!


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