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A763021 - Naturism
Demon Drawer Posted Jun 25, 2002
Because sadly there is already an edited entry at A378209 and I don't think this really addds anything to what has already been written
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Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 Posted Jun 25, 2002
Also because this is an opinion piece, not a factual report as the other entry is.
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Witty Ditty Posted Jul 16, 2002
*in GR mode*
Topic already covered in the guide - a move tot he entry?
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Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 Posted Jul 16, 2002
Would the author like to comment?
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Howard Posted Jul 18, 2002
The topic is already covered in the guide that is true, but my piece add an extra dimension, the "why worry" one.
OK it is an opinion piece but it is hard writing a guide entry without an opinion, after all, readers of all sorts of guide are relying on the opinion of the writer as a guide! It is cold at the North Pole. Opinion? Would a penguin agree?
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Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 Posted Jul 18, 2002
I'd be interested in your views on the risks of skin cancer for naturists. That's worth discussing.
And by the way, there are no penguins at the North Pole.
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Howard Posted Jul 23, 2002
As far as I know, skin cancer is caused by being burnt rather than tanned. I use factor 20 even when overcast and am just a little less white than before. Some of my non naturist friends in Australia have had many skin cancers, now they all use high factor sun cream. One can enjoy the open air even under a sun shade!
There are no penguins at the North Pole. Sensible creatures, they clearly read the guide!
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Martin Harper Posted Jul 23, 2002
Yep, it is difficult to write a guide entry without making it an opinion piece. But it's worth the effort. It makes the Edited Guide an impartial guide, and it helps include a wide variety of people - whether naked or not.
Further, we really do try and avoid duplication in the guide. Rather than write about a topic that has been covered, why not write about a new topic? You could write about light aircraft, or some aspect of web design. Or you could write on a specific aspect of naturism with which you are familiar, be it naturism at home, or naturist beaches, or naturist clubs, or discrimination against naturists - whatever takes your fancy.
Besides, if you look at the Edited piece, you'll find that it addresses many of your points, such as interplay with christianity, effects on children, embarassment, and so forth. If there's anything it's missing, why not start a new conversation under the entry to address them?
-Lucinda (who isn't naked)
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Demon Drawer Posted Jul 23, 2002
Shame.
*wishing he was naked but might be about to get kicked out of easy everything if he kicked off his clothes*
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Jul 23, 2002
I am naked!
Serious mode tho'- as there aleady is an entry on naturism, I don't really think this belongs here. If you feel like expanding the entry a little Howard, how about turning it into a piece for The Post? That way you can express your opinions, and plenty of people will still get to see it?
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jul 24, 2002
Like others said before, you'd need to give it some twist to go between or to the sides of existing Edited entries. The dangers of sunburns would be such a twist There's only A618635
(Non-melanoma Skin Cancer) and A610011 (Albinism - a brief introduction) which touch it, so there's a gap for you!
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Martin Harper Posted Aug 22, 2002
So, should this be removed from Peer Review? It's opinion and an update as it stands, unfortunately.
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Aug 22, 2002
Yep- I propose a move abck to the entry, as it fails to meet the writing guidelines on several points.
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Peer Review: A763021 - Naturism
- 1: Howard (Jun 25, 2002)
- 2: Demon Drawer (Jun 25, 2002)
- 3: Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 (Jun 25, 2002)
- 4: Witty Ditty (Jul 16, 2002)
- 5: Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 (Jul 16, 2002)
- 6: Howard (Jul 18, 2002)
- 7: Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 (Jul 18, 2002)
- 8: Howard (Jul 23, 2002)
- 9: Martin Harper (Jul 23, 2002)
- 10: Demon Drawer (Jul 23, 2002)
- 11: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Jul 23, 2002)
- 12: Martin Harper (Jul 24, 2002)
- 13: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Jul 24, 2002)
- 14: Martin Harper (Aug 22, 2002)
- 15: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Aug 22, 2002)
- 16: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Aug 25, 2002)
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