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Danny B Started conversation Jun 16, 2009
Entry: It Started With a Kiss - A53282667
Author: Danny B. [Musicians' Guild (U150368); Science EXplained (A4108330); Curator; Scavenger] - U182633
OK... Stretcher Entry. As I'd already done the whole 'writing from a female perspective' back in Round 3, I thought I ought to write a sequel. Not entirely convinced that more poetry was a good idea. Still, this is supposed to be a stretch...
A53282667 - It Started With a Kiss
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jun 16, 2009
That's sweet, and aww, and...
Too nice. 
None of the women on this site are that tolerant.
(Where did you find her, you romantic? 
)
A53282667 - It Started With a Kiss
Danny B Posted Jun 17, 2009
Too nice? Darnit... I knew I should have stuck with cynically comic 
Still - got to try new things occasionally!
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aka Bel - A87832164 Posted Jun 17, 2009
Nice one, David (although I liked the first one better. Can't say why, though).
Careful what you say, Mr gheorgheni. 
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Tibley Bobley Posted Jun 17, 2009
It's a warning to us all
Go easy on the 
and be careful what you kiss
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minorvogonpoet Posted Jun 17, 2009
Aww, it's quite romantic! 
I'm not sure you can switch from talking about 'him' to 'you' at the last moment.
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Danny B Posted Jun 17, 2009
Yeah - I wasn't sure I'd get away with that. Let me have a think about it...
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AlexAshman Posted Jun 19, 2009
Very clever, carrying on from a previous entry. A little sugary-sweet, but otherwise no complaints.
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Keith Miller yes that Keith Miller Posted Jun 19, 2009
, I liked this
which is odd for me, I don't really like this type normally.
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Alternative Writing Workshop: A53282667 - It Started With a Kiss
- 1: Danny B (Jun 16, 2009)
- 2: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jun 16, 2009)
- 3: Danny B (Jun 17, 2009)
- 4: Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor (Jun 17, 2009)
- 5: aka Bel - A87832164 (Jun 17, 2009)
- 6: Tibley Bobley (Jun 17, 2009)
- 7: minorvogonpoet (Jun 17, 2009)
- 8: Danny B (Jun 17, 2009)
- 9: AlexAshman (Jun 19, 2009)
- 10: Keith Miller yes that Keith Miller (Jun 19, 2009)
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