A Conversation for Hypatia of Alexandria
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Fragilis - h2g2 Cured My Tabular Obsession Started conversation Aug 1, 2000
I feel this sentence should be the first one in the entry: 'Hypatia was a [Greek] mathematician, scientist and philosopher, who taught at the Mouseion in Alexandria.' This sentence truly defines your subject. The current introduction might be safely moved to the biography section.
Also, please look over the first paragraph under the header 'Hypatia's Impact.' The sentences should probably be broken up into smaller chunks.
This is an excellent entry about someone I had never heard of before. Thanks for writing it! 
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J'au-æmne Posted Aug 1, 2000
Thanks Fragilis. I looked at the subject and knew it was you I really am making an effort to use shorter sentences, honest
*goes away to do something with those very helpful suggestions*
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