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Baryonic Being - save GuideML out of a word-processor: A7720562 Posted May 23, 2005
Great entry.
Some points: in this sentence,
"Plants that might be interesting to grow under this theme would anything with spines or prickles", you missed out the word 'be' between 'would' and 'anything', I believe.
And here:
"Plant it in full sun, it can grow up" -> "Planted in full sun, it can grow up"
"The number of plants that would fit into a these such as this are myriad" - you mean 'garden', don't you, instead of 'these'?
There was a question on Who Wants to Be a Millionaire about arnica (contestant had to ask the audience, I think). Not that I watch the other side, of course, if you moderators were wondering; I was just channel-flicking, honestly.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted May 24, 2005
"into a these such as this" -- I assume this should be "into a theme such as this".
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Mina Posted May 24, 2005
Thank you! Made those changes, it was meant to be 'plant it in full sun' as it's instructions, so I've made that a bit clearer now (I hope).
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