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A3940977 - The Torture Garden

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Baryonic Being - save GuideML out of a word-processor: A7720562

Great entry. smiley - smiley

Some points: in this sentence,
"Plants that might be interesting to grow under this theme would anything with spines or prickles", you missed out the word 'be' between 'would' and 'anything', I believe.

And here:
"Plant it in full sun, it can grow up" -> "Planted in full sun, it can grow up"

"The number of plants that would fit into a these such as this are myriad" - you mean 'garden', don't you, instead of 'these'?

There was a question on Who Wants to Be a Millionaire about arnica (contestant had to ask the audience, I think). Not that I watch the other side, of course, if you moderators were wondering; I was just channel-flicking, honestly.


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Gnomon - time to move on

"into a these such as this" -- I assume this should be "into a theme such as this".


A3940977 - The Torture Garden

Post 63

Mina

Thank you! Made those changes, it was meant to be 'plant it in full sun' as it's instructions, so I've made that a bit clearer now (I hope).


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Gnomon - time to move on

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Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream

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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

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Azara

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Mina

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