A Conversation for John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 1

dim26trav

Entry: John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation - A3891837
Author: dim26trav - U528315

This will be my first attempt at making a guide entry , if there ais constructive criticism please help me out until it is accepted.

Thanks


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 2

Cyzaki

I've finally had chance to read your entry, and there are a few points I noticed:

smiley - starTitle: John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation --> ...Morning Star...

smiley - starCan you remove the first line that reads 'Wycliffe: The Morning Star of the Reformation' as it isn't necessary.

smiley - starI think you need a few lines at the beginning about what the reformation was, and when it took place, just to set the scene.

smiley - starFirst paragraph: REformation --> Reformation

smiley - starI think you need a footnote explaining 'Baccalaureate levels'

smiley - starJohn PUrvey --> John Purvey

smiley - starunpoaid serfs --> unpaid serfs (maybe you should run the whole entry through a spell checker?)

smiley - star"Holy Roman Empire," --> Holy Roman Empire,

smiley - star"hold the kingdom as "feudatory" --> hold the kingdom as 'feudatory'

smiley - star2000 marks - can you insert a footnote explaining what a mark is?


Will that do for now? I think your article is very interesting, and I know a lot more about the reformation than I did before!

smiley - panda


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 3

echomikeromeo

I notice that you spelled "Wycliff" a different way in the title than in the body of the entry. Could you decide on one spelling and stick to it, please?


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 4

Cyzaki

Also, I've read through the threads at the bottom of the entry - can you work through them and make sure you address all the points already made there?

smiley - panda


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 5

Cyzaki

How's this going?

smiley - panda


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 6

AlexAshman


Author has elvised - move to FleaMarket?


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 7

AlexAshman


Note: This Entry has been seconded (F43882?thread=3835955) has been added to a list of Writing Workshop removals. The Entry will hopefully be removed shortly, after which I will submit it to the FleaMarket.


A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation

Post 8

AlexAshman


Ok, the Entry has now left the EGWW.

*unsubscribes*


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