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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
dim26trav Started conversation Nov 11, 2005
Entry: John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation - A3891837
Author: dim26trav - U528315
This will be my first attempt at making a guide entry , if there ais constructive criticism please help me out until it is accepted.
Thanks
A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
Cyzaki Posted Dec 12, 2005
I've finally had chance to read your entry, and there are a few points I noticed:
Title: John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation --> ...Morning Star...
Can you remove the first line that reads 'Wycliffe: The Morning Star of the Reformation' as it isn't necessary.
I think you need a few lines at the beginning about what the reformation was, and when it took place, just to set the scene.
First paragraph: REformation --> Reformation
I think you need a footnote explaining 'Baccalaureate levels'
John PUrvey --> John Purvey
unpoaid serfs --> unpaid serfs (maybe you should run the whole entry through a spell checker?)
"Holy Roman Empire," --> Holy Roman Empire,
"hold the kingdom as "feudatory" --> hold the kingdom as 'feudatory'
2000 marks - can you insert a footnote explaining what a mark is?
Will that do for now? I think your article is very interesting, and I know a lot more about the reformation than I did before!
A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
echomikeromeo Posted Dec 13, 2005
I notice that you spelled "Wycliff" a different way in the title than in the body of the entry. Could you decide on one spelling and stick to it, please?
A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
Cyzaki Posted Dec 13, 2005
Also, I've read through the threads at the bottom of the entry - can you work through them and make sure you address all the points already made there?
A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
AlexAshman Posted Jan 26, 2007
Author has elvised - move to FleaMarket?
A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
AlexAshman Posted Jan 27, 2007
Note: This Entry has been seconded (F43882?thread=3835955) has been added to a list of Writing Workshop removals. The Entry will hopefully be removed shortly, after which I will submit it to the FleaMarket.
A3891837 - John Wycliff: Mornings Star of the Reformation
AlexAshman Posted Jan 29, 2007
Ok, the Entry has now left the EGWW.
*unsubscribes*
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