h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Amman, Jordan – A Short Guide **draft** - A3624699
Author: Lady Pennywhistle - Join the March for Jack! For a map of the march: A3671921 - U250656

Actually I think it's almost done, but it still looks to me like it's missing something and I'm kinda stuck... so I'd appreciate any feedback.

Actually, I think this is more than ready for Peer Review!

One note on GuideML style, though: You might want to check how you entered the first few sections- they show up as a little difficult to read on my screen.

Just had another look - GuideML looks fine I think... difficult to read in what way?

Well, starting from the second section, the paragraphs seem to run together. It's easier for me to read with a line break in between them. You might want to check how you coded those compared with the first section. Does that help?

Oh, I understand what you meant - versus tags. I've made a couple of changes to that now.

Lady Pennywhistle!!! All I can say is This is fab, and it belongs in Peer Review..

Ooh and one should use tags instead of BR ones, but that can be dealt with in Peer Review.

Z...

Alright then, so nobody thinks I might have left something out here?

Well, I really don't know the area, so I couldn't say- "Wait! What about Hussain's sandwich shop across the street?" But as a potential tourist, it looks like it's got everything- except geologic setting

I could ask my sister, she knows a bit more about that than me... the nice thing though, coming from Israel, is seeing how the other side of the Syrian-African rift is just the same as ours (which makes sense of course, but it's still cool to see it).


Anyway, I'll be moving this to PR then. Thanks for the lovely feedback!