h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I had written this entry about one of the most brilliant american jazz saxophonist couple of weeks ago.
It has been already edited by Pseudomys and on my personal space it shows the status 'pending'.
Because I'm not sure, what exactly does it mean, I decided to give you a small advice - maybe it will help!

This is an excellent article. Perhaps a little restructuring of the introduction would make it clearer to those meeting Mr. Redman for the first time exactly why he is important and why they should carry on reading.



Amy the (Scout) Ant

Hey Amy, thanks a lot.

Your suggestion is not bad, but I think, as the status is 'pending' and Pseudemys already editored it, I have no possibility to reedit it (no edit button anymore at my space)

Kasia

Pending means that the entry is no longer in the queue waiting to be assigned to a sub-editor. An Sub-editor has it. When an entry goes from "recommended" to "pending" it is frozen so that the only person who can edit it is the sub-editor. It doesn't necessarily mean that the sub-editor has finished editing it.

Therefore, you can follow the link to the editor's userpage, and leave a msg for them telling them what you might like changed.

However, the title alone, if it is kept, tells the reader who Redman is -- a Jazz Saxophonist. That alone is probably enough to decide whether to read on or not.

Gavroche


There's no need to worry much...your entry is not far away from reaching the end of the editing process. It is a good entry, and one you should be proud of.

Gavroche,

thanks for your nice words, I'm a patient person, so I can wait.
Meanwhile I'm trying to write about other jazz musicians.

Kasia