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Peer Review: A2909649 - Ho Chi Minh

Post 1

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Entry: Ho Chi Minh - A2909649
Author: John-the-gardener, h2g2 Friends of Tibet (A2170982) - U33262

Regard Uncle Ho.

Regards, JTG


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Post 2

J

Very good. smiley - ok Some amusing stuff as well as some serious stuff. I liked the intro.

If I may level one criticism at you, the last coupla paragraphs in the The Person section seem to talk about the War and not the person. smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 3

Phred Firecloud

Excellent. Ho's "twelve recommendations" in 1948 could well be applied to advantage in modern conflicts.

http://www.marxists.org/reference/archive/ho-chi-minh/works/1948/04/05.htm


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Post 4

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Thanks, Jodan.

I agree, Phred. Thanks for the link. smiley - cheers


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Post 5

echomikeromeo

Should the title perhaps say "Ho Chi Minh - The City and the Person", just so we know who/what we're reading about?


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Post 6

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

I don't think so. 'Ho Chi Minh' covers both nicely.

If somebody else writes one about the board game, they should definitely call it 'Ho Chi Minh, the board game' or, better yet, 'Ho Chi Minh, the board game - not the city or the person'.

JTG smiley - winkeye


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Post 7

echomikeromeo

smiley - ok

I'm probably far too fond of those subtitle thingys for my own good.smiley - biggrin


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Post 8

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Careful, they're addictive. smiley - laugh


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Post 9

Paully

Actually, I think I agree that a little suffix to clarify that the entry is about both the city and the man would be good... Anyway, this is a fabulous entry. Really glad it's just been accepted into the EG! smiley - smiley

Paully


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Post 10

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Post 11

Cyzaki

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Post 12

echomikeromeo

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Post 13

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Thanks, everyone. smiley - cheers


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Post 14

Phred Firecloud

Good work. smiley - cheers


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Post 15

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Thanks Phred. smiley - cheers


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