A Conversation for Varanasi, an experience

Peer Review: A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 1

Comfortably Numb!!

Entry: Varanasi, an experience - A2850969
Author: MiniMy - U181646

Guys, thrash your brains out with this entry and let me know what needs to be addressed before it can make it to the guide!!!


A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 2

J

Looks rather good to me smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 3

GreyDesk

Just to let folk know, this thread - F1857491?thread=454855 - is the one where the original author and the new author are having their chat about the pros and cons of this entry.

I suggest with all the confusion that has gone on with this entry during its history, that all comments are directed to that thread, reagrdless of the fact that it isn't the 'official' Peer Review thread. A case of KISS as it were smiley - smiley


A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 4

J

My comment wasn't especially intelligent or helpful so I'll keep it keep it where it is if it's not too much trouble smiley - winkeye

smiley - blacksheep


A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 5

Comfortably Numb!!

thats true. is there a way this thread can be deleted?


A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 6

GreyDesk

No there isn't any way to delete threads. My advice is just to carry on with the thread that you and MiniMy have been using smiley - smiley


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Post 7

MiniMy

smiley - whistle


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Post 8

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

It sounds like a beautiful place, and I loved the romantic introduction.

A few typos:

a seven day = a seven-day
awe inspiring = awe-inspiring
center = centre

smiley - ok


A2850969 - Varanasi, an experience

Post 9

MiniMy

done, done and done!

thanks! smiley - cheers

mini smiley - zoom


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Post 10

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Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!


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Post 11

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

smiley - bubbly Congratulations! Well done!


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Post 12

MiniMy

thank ye... smiley - smiley

unfortunately, the original author seems to have elvised...

minismiley - zoom


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Post 13

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

nevermind - at least you are still about! smiley - winkeye


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Post 14

GreyDesk

Well when they get an e-mail saying that an entry of theirs has been picked, perhaps it will encourage them to visit us again.

Either way, well done MiniMy, this is a lovely guide entry smiley - ok


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Post 15

Comfortably Numb!!

Hey Guys!!
I have not elvised as suggested by some of you!!! Was a trifle busy with my travels around the continental USA.
Thanks for picking up the entry and it will be great to see it in the edited version of the guide. I believe Varanasi is a great place to visit and I hope this entry helps more people to overcome their inertia.

CN


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Post 16

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

smiley - bubbly

Congratulations on the entry!

It will be allocated to a sub-editor when one is free, and you will be sent an email on the day it appears on the frontpage smiley - ok

smiley - smiley


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