h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Jim Henson - muppeteer, filmmaker, television producer - A2553969
Author: Opticalillusion - Listen to the musica, Let it resonata through a ya- slow and steady wins the race - U231227

Opti proudly presents in conjunction with the letter J, Jim Henson

Could use a little polishing. Read it out loud and you'll see that the sentences are punctuated at random.

Spellchecker too, for example:

Missipi = Mississippi

but this is a good entry, the best I've seen you submit Opti, so well done.

GB

Used the computer for speelchecking and grammatical errors.

Thank you for writing this. Someone should do an Entry for the Muppets, also.

Well I thought it was about time it got updated.

so is this to be moved to PR 2?

I need a spot of advice should I take out the last two paras or leave them in? If someone is going to write a seperate entry on the Muppets then it may make sense to take the two paras out and give them to the Muppet entry.

Good stuff!

Maybe 'The Storyteller' deserves a bit more - it was a series in its own right - 9 episodes, 1 Emmy, 1 BAFTA.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0092383/

Great entry

One or two small tweaky things..

create The Fantastic Miss Piggy Show (1982), Fraggle Rock (1983) for pay-cable channel HBO.

should there be an 'and' between the miss piggy show and fragle rock? it would read better to me if there was.

and

Caroll Spinney, who wore the Big Bird outfit touched the hearts of those who watched by singing Kermit the Frog's signature song, 'Bein' Green'.

I would have a second comma in that sentance after big bird outfit.




(Serephina too lazy to chage login )

Any chance you could post the above comments in PR F48874?thread=3432534 which is where the entry is now?