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Peer Review: A22743614 - Endemol: Realism in Big Brother UK.
robbwindow Started conversation May 15, 2007
Entry: Endemol: Realism in Big Brother UK. - A22743614
Author: robbwindow - U2271089
Big Brother needs to get real. This review uses Chomsky, Barthes, Hill, Todorov, Jim Carrey and many more to explain realism of U.K. Big Brother.
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McKay The Disorganised Posted May 17, 2007
Well - I tried because its an interesting idea. However, research Research Research.
Start by finding out the difference between utopia and distopia.
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robbwindow Posted Jun 22, 2007
Distopia a binary opposite that seems contray to my article submitted however it seems an acceptable anti thesis, thanks 4 the feedback.
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Recumbentman Posted Jun 23, 2007
This is a university project, right?
You will have to make some changes before it fits the h2g2 format.
Put it in GuideML; look up the GuideML Clinic A187229
Take out first-person references and irrelevancies, viz
>Footnote: Russell Brand has announced that he has quit. Edemol this week just purchased The Hammer house of Horror a new element am sure that may influence the format or comedy genre of big brother in UK. Meanwhile this week begins a new episode of big brother. The only contestants I’ve met who has been on big brother is Goldie, Bez and Ken. I have met all the comedians who host the shows and have just noticed a new advert on the web-site ‘Celebrity Big Bubble’ “Stay in and get tanked”, Marilyn Manson appears to be the winner.
Put the references to books into footnotes, and give the name of a book at its first mention, not just the authors and page-numbers. The bibliography should be in real footnotes, not a final paragraph called "footnote". If you wish to list books not quoted or cited in the body of the entry, put them in under a header "Further Reading" or some such.
Tidy up the grammar, e.g.
> The name ‘Big Brother’ have origins from George Orwell’s idea
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the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish Posted Jun 28, 2007
Looking at this, this seems to be heading towards personal opinion, or at least not fittign in with the writing guidelines for first-person usage. Have a look for the writing guidelines (don't have link handy ATM) and see what we want for entries in Peer Review
tjm
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Recumbentman Posted Jun 28, 2007
A53209 Writing for the Edited Guide
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Milos Posted Sep 9, 2007
rob, will you be doing any more work on this?
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