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A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 41

spook

fine, i give in, i've added the para, with the only change being that i've put wes craven went on to 'direct' the scream films, as he didn't write any of them.

spook smiley - orangefish


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 42

spook

ok i've added links now.

spook smiley - orangefish


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 43

spook

so, is this finished now?


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 44

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Updates tend to take a lot longer than Peer Review, so we usually leave them to incubate for a while, until we have time to do the update in-house. Looking good though!


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 45

spook

what time-span will this be, roughly?:

a) Within 2 weeks
b) Before 2004
c) By about next Easter


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 46

Spelugx the Beige, Wizard, Perl, Thaumatologically Challenged

Tuesday?


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 47

caper_plip

Just remembered... Freddy bleeds green blood in the dreamworld...smiley - ill Might want to add that in...

Caper Plipsmiley - artist


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 48

spook

i won't add that, but only because i think that's inaccurate. He has bled green blood in the dream world before, but he's also bled red blood. i think since he has a power over dreams, he can choose a blood colour that will spook people out!smiley - smiley

spook smiley - orangefish


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 49

caper_plip

Rainbow blood!smiley - biggrin


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 50

spook

i have added a little footnote to the entry in the freddy rules section though. just an additional thing i thought of.

now, what entry to get my update teeth in to next...


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 51

Gnomon - time to move on

I've only just discovered the Update Forum, so here are some typos for you to correct:

100 insane murders --> 100 insane murderers
en dof --> end of
Janitor --> janitor
outskirst --> outskirts
rvenge --> revenge
There should not be full stops (periods) after abbreviations like Dr, Mrs, Sgt, Lt.
arrested of murdering --> arrested for murdering
murdered for parents --> murdered by the parents
Chrissie to is killed --> Chrissie who is killed
very very long --> very, very long


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 52

J

Good entry, I think. Just a few typos that may or may not have already been brought up...

en dof his --> end of his
outskirst --> outskirts
"Freddy has a daughter" should it be "Freddy had a daughter"?
"There have so far been eight Freddy movies to date" only needs either 'so far' or 'to date'. Not both
"None - pretty poor really." couldn't that just be 'None."?
back to live --> back to life
"the stories How he" should have a line break in there between stories and How he. And a full stop after stories

Also, shouldn't the movie titles all be in italics?

I like it.

smiley - blacksheep


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 53

spook

ok i've updated the entry with all the corrections. i don't think all the movies in the subheaders need to be italicised since they are in subheaders, but if i'm wrong about that, please corect me.

spook


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 54

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Are there any final comments for this entry? If not, are we okay to over-write the original and list this as updated on the Front Page?


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 55

spook

it's ready!


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 56

The Apprentice

Been in and out. Kind of busy. Looks good. Few minor corrections, but nothing massive:

First paragraph - 'glove with blades attatched' - 'attached'
Last 'Before Death' bullet - 'They went to a power plant where Freddy lived...' - 'the power plant'
'A New Nightmare' section - 'Heather Langenkamp, actor of Nancy' - doesn't ring true - 'Heather Langenkamp, whoplayed Nancy'?
'A New Nightmare' section - 'while Heather protects her and her son...' - should be 'while Heather protects her son and herself.'

Otherwise, go for it!

The Apprentice
smiley - scientist


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 57

Smij - Formerly Jimster

As soon as there's indication these comments have been addressed, I'll take this as an update.


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 58

spook

done


A2063251 - Freddy Krueger - The Film Character

Post 59

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Right, just catching up after my brief holiday. This entry has now been ported across to the original. I've changed the title slightly to incorporate a lot of the extra information in the update and it's now at the top of the 'Recently Updated' section on the Front Page. Well done, Spook, and everyone else who chipped in.

smiley - cheers


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Post 60

Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - bubbly


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