A Conversation for Baku, Azerbaijan

A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 21

Z

Scouts, circling?

No

smiley - shark


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 22

Eusebio - squad number 11

smiley - erm

sorry - didn't get a chance to update yet - got called in to work smiley - winkeye


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 23

Ormondroyd

smiley - yikes Hope you soon recover! smiley - winkeye


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 24

Eusebio - squad number 11

Didn't half ruin my weekend - I tell you this job would be fantastic if it wasn't for the work smiley - winkeye

smiley - laugh


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 25

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Scouts may be circling, but not until the entry is complete.

Let us know when you've made the changes.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 26

Otto Fisch ("Stop analysing Strava.... and cut your hedge")


Circling? Flocking more like...

Oh look, it's a load of flocking scouts...


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 27

Number Six

I've never heard us called that before smiley - smiley

smiley - mod


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 28

Ormondroyd

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Flocking? Us?


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 29

Number Six

Popped by??? Swarmed by, more like! There's a multitude out there...

smiley - mod


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 30

Oberon2001 (Scout)

Scouts? Here? smiley - whistle
Oberon2001


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 31

Number Six

With our reputation? What on earth were they thinking of???

smiley - mod


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 32

Eusebio - squad number 11

Okay, the newest draft has just been typed out smiley - winkeye

Let me know what you think ... unfortunately, try as I might, the only thing I can find out about the Shirvan Shas is that they ruled the Shirvan region ... smiley - erm

smiley - football


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 33

Z

This is looking good, i do like the changes that you've made, the only rather minor nitpick is the fact that we you are refering to the names of places it isn't the house style to use bold. The only offical use of bold is as a "Sub Subheader" in which case, like a sub header the word in bold should be a line on it's own. As far as I can see just removing the the bold it's self would have very little effect on how the article reads so don't worry.

This is good, and you may have noticed circling scouts smiley - winkeye


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 34

Eusebio - squad number 11

Done smiley - ok

Thanks smiley - smiley


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 35

Oberon2001 (Scout)

Isn't it house style to use italics instead of bold?... Or am I just very tired?
Oberon2001


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 36

Z

Italics are for titles, of books, films, plays, poems of book length, and the names of ships - bold is a sub sub header..


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 37

Oberon2001 (Scout)

*hides Scout badge*
Well how was I supposed to know that? smiley - tongueout
Oberon2001


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 38

Eusebio - squad number 11

Is there anything else you think I should change?

MTRF
smiley - football


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 39

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Yes, MTRF. smiley - smiley

This sentence:

'The Maiden's Tower is Baku's most famous tourist attraction and adorns what little tourist tat there is to be found in Azerbaijan.'

clunks. It's the word 'adorns' that doesn't seem to fit. Do you mean that the attraction is the centre for tourist tat?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


A1157609 - Baku, Azerbaijan

Post 40

Cyzaki

I think they mean that a picture of the tower can be found on all the tourist tat...

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