A Conversation for The Battle Of Thermopylae

A1154837 - The Battle Of Thermopylae

Post 41

weberquetzal

Wow it's been a long time since I learnt about the Battle of Thermopylae! It's great to see your entry.smiley - ok

I think that its worthwhile polishing it up a bit and then it'll be an excellent entry! smiley - biggrin

Instead of lots and lots of background maybe just a little to just fill it out would be enough. But it was definitely an incredible event and must have been terrifying at the time! smiley - biggrin

wq


A1154837 - The Battle Of Thermopylae

Post 42

Asmodai Dark (The Eternal Builder, servant of Howard, Crom, and Beans)

Thanks for the imput.
The backgrounds nessacry and the guide entery doesn't contain that much (which it should). Also, the entery was unintentionally copied. I will be re-writing when i get time, under the name 'battle of thermoplyae' but it won't be done roughily 4 quite awhile.


A1154837 - The Battle Of Thermopylae

Post 43

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

If that's the case, my suggestion would be that you remove this thread from Peer Review, and then you can submit again when you've had time to work some more.

You can remove this thread from Peer Review by clicking on the link below:

<./>SubmitReviewForum?action=removethread&rfid=1&h2g2id=1154837</.>

smiley - cheers
Mikey


A1154837 - The Battle Of Thermopylae

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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Thanks!

smiley - cheers
Mikey


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