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Spiff Posted Aug 29, 2003
Hi Nylar,
sorry to be an awkward b***er, but having a look at your corrections, i fear quite a few typoes crept in along the way...
perhaps a slower re-read would help...
spiff
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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Aug 29, 2003
Oh yeah also in Tie Fighter in the mission where you have to attack the platform with the Magma Pulse weapons the Rebels are using Z95's
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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Aug 29, 2003
Ok.
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Bistroist Posted Aug 29, 2003
First of all, I think this is a great entry, and I'm sorry to be such a pedant...
But one thing struck me as odd. In the intro, you refer to "the battles between the Jedi Knights of the light side of the Force and the Sith Lords of the dark" as part of the original trilogy, but isn't Darth Vader the only Sith Lord they do battle with? It's really not important, and if nothing else, the current version has a nice ring to it, I was just wondering, that's all.
Links: You've mentioned the TIE Fighter entry yourself, I believe there's even an entry on the films somewhere, if you'll excuse me...
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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Aug 29, 2003
It might look nice if you use the tag.
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 4, 2003
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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Sep 4, 2003
Well done!!
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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Sep 4, 2003
Fantastic...But if whoever's gonna be subbing this could spare a moment, I'd like to make sure that the Z-95 is added as well, as I did promise that along the way?
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SchrEck Inc. Posted Sep 15, 2003
Hey Mat,
I've been given your fabulous entry to subedit, and it's nearly finished, see A1165484. I'd like to include the section about the Z-95 you wanted to add, could you drop me a note when you're finished with this?
SchrEck Inc.
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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Sep 16, 2003
That's the section on the Z-95 finished, so if you want to add it to the EG version then go right ahead.
Thanks
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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Sep 17, 2003
Thanks for that.
The EG version looks great, by the way!
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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master Posted Sep 18, 2003
Good skills Matt and Schreck, the article looks fine... and I luv the bit about the Z95!!!
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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face) Posted Sep 22, 2003
Thanks Ferrettbadger...But you don't have to be so generous as to add an extra "t" to my name; one has always been enough for me!
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