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Post 21

Spiff


Hi Nylar,

sorry to be an awkward b***er, but having a look at your corrections, i fear quite a few typoes crept in along the way... smiley - sadface

perhaps a slower re-read would help...

spiff


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Post 22

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Oh yeah also in Tie Fighter in the mission where you have to attack the platform with the Magma Pulse weapons the Rebels are using Z95's


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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Ok.


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Post 24

Z

Good entry!


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Post 25

Bistroist

First of all, I think this is a great entry, and I'm sorry to be such a pedant...

But one thing struck me as odd. In the intro, you refer to "the battles between the Jedi Knights of the light side of the Force and the Sith Lords of the dark" as part of the original trilogy, but isn't Darth Vader the only Sith Lord they do battle with? It's really not important, and if nothing else, the current version has a nice ring to it, I was just wondering, that's all.

Links: You've mentioned the TIE Fighter entry yourself, I believe there's even an entry on the films somewhere, if you'll excuse me...


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Post 26

Bistroist

Yep, A847497 and A142228 respectively


cheers,
~Bistro smiley - orangefish


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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

It might look nice if you use the tag.


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Geggs

Much deserved! smiley - bubbly


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Congrats.

smiley - cheerssmiley - ok

smiley - ale


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Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Well done!!


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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Fantastic...But if whoever's gonna be subbing this could spare a moment, I'd like to make sure that the Z-95 is added as well, as I did promise that along the way?

Thanks again!


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SchrEck Inc.

Hey Mat,

I've been given your fabulous entry to subedit, and it's nearly finished, see A1165484. I'd like to include the section about the Z-95 you wanted to add, could you drop me a note when you're finished with this?

SchrEck Inc.


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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

That's the section on the Z-95 finished, so if you want to add it to the EG version then go right ahead.

Thanks


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SchrEck Inc.

Done! smiley - ok


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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Thanks for that.

The EG version looks great, by the way!


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SchrEck Inc.

Thanks! smiley - blush


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Post 38

Ferrettbadger. The Renegade Master

Good skills Matt and Schreck, the article looks fine... and I luv the bit about the Z95!!!


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Mat Lindsay (the researcher formerly known as Nylarthotep...now he has a name, all he needs is a face)

Thanks Ferrettbadger...But you don't have to be so generous as to add an extra "t" to my name; one has always been enough for me!


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