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A1131968 - Airedale Terriers

Post 21

Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent)

The "problem" with the footnotes is easily fixed.
In two cases the period should not be there (i.e. mainly hunting foxes, badgers, weasels, ducks and birds) and in the other, the foot note is on the wrong side of the period.

If those are the only problems, I would say it's ready to go (short but sweet).

Awu




A1131968 - Airedale Terriers

Post 22

nada

smiley - okI think I fixed those slight problems..
Anything else you (anyone reading this) recommend?


A1131968 - Airedale Terriers

Post 23

Number Six

All I reckon it needs now is an extra space and a switch of two letters in a certain sentence (So,an Airedale's ideal owner should be strong, althetic, and confident.) smiley - smiley

smiley - mod


A1131968 - Airedale Terriers

Post 24

histrel

I liked this. My nana bred Airedales and my mum is on her 3rd - wouldn't have any other type. All the grammar points have been mentioned. A bit more detail definitely but lots of interesting facts I didn't know about. ? I did have someone once say about the type of health problems found in Airedales that have been too 'highly' bred - might be something to look into?
Good Luck smiley - smiley


A1131968 - Airedale Terriers

Post 25

Cissdur

Just want to say that I like the entry and the dog. smiley - smiley

Cissdur


A1131968 - Airedale Terriers

Post 26

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Histrel- that can be a problem with all pedigree dogs- after all, a pedigree dog is by nature a close genetic line.

smiley - ale


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Cyzaki

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nada

Oh! Thanks!
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Number Six

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nada

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